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Straw Dogs 刍狗
Heaven and Earth are heartless, treating creatures like straw dogs.*
This is how I’ve seen many treated such,
Not all, for there are those who work the straw.
And only humans think this way and clutch,
To pitch aside the useless that I saw.
To have them set alight in sacrifice,
This is how I’ve seen many treated such.
Not even offering a bowl of rice,
The pennies pocketed safe from a hunch.
It’s humankind by choice that’s out of touch,
That holds it over us who don’t belong.
This is how I’ve seen many treated such,
I too am used, a victim, right or wrong.
To handfuls of the “haves” we must obey,
To genuflect and use this as a crutch.
Why any of us feel that that’s okay?
This is how I’ve seen many treated such!
This is how I’ve seen many treated such,
Not all, for there are those who work the straw.
And only humans think this way and clutch,
To pitch aside the useless that I saw.
To have them set alight in sacrifice,
This is how I’ve seen many treated such.
Not even offering a bowl of rice,
The pennies pocketed safe from a hunch.
It’s humankind by choice that’s out of touch,
That holds it over us who don’t belong.
This is how I’ve seen many treated such,
I too am used, a victim, right or wrong.
To handfuls of the “haves” we must obey,
To genuflect and use this as a crutch.
Why any of us feel that that’s okay?
This is how I’ve seen many treated such!
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 20th Dec 2019
| Edited 9th Feb 2020
Author's Note
*From the Tao Te Ching.
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Re. Straw Dogs
20th Dec 2019 5:39am
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20th Dec 2019 5:44am
Thank you, L, nice to see you stop by. Do you have a particular view of the poem?
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20th Dec 2019 5:59am
love the rhyming...comme on dit on francais 'plus ca change, plus la meme chose'....according to one of my favourite online gurus, the Isha Foundation's Sadhguru, we are no longer in Kali Yuga (Age of Darkness) and are in the ascending cosmic cycle ...I find this encouraging...your compassionate vision is definitely part of this ascending universal conspicuousness...
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20th Dec 2019 6:06am
My goodness, thank you for your beautifully informative response - very much appreciated.
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20th Dec 2019 11:06am
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Thank you so much, insightful Kitty sister, who honors my poet’s abode.🙏🏻
Holiday regards
Jadey🐾
Holiday regards
Jadey🐾
Re. Straw Dogs
20th Dec 2019 2:49pm
true visions of the world in which we live within sad but so very true indeed as it is a shame...respect
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21st Dec 2019 00:53am
A shame with sad aspects of human life.
Your words often walk the blade of biblical, which I respect very much, dear Stoney.🙏🏻
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Your words often walk the blade of biblical, which I respect very much, dear Stoney.🙏🏻
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22nd Dec 2019 11:36am
thank you this is true i have seen things that another human can do to another and it sadens me to think how far we have gone off course of what it is to be human not to show compassion of what love is from the depth of the heart and soul...respect poetess
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Re. Straw Dogs
20th Dec 2019 4:18pm
This carries so much truth. It's something I've always thought about and how it affects everyone. You've penned it so eloquently.
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21st Dec 2019 1:18am
Thank you, Wally.🙏🏻 Tho’ my head is lowered in the honor, and humbled because of these issues that have existed for millennia.
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Re. Straw Dogs
20th Dec 2019 5:38pm
Well said Jade. My last write was focused on the absurdity and obtuse disregard our human society perpetuates.
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21st Dec 2019 1:32am
Indeed, Daniel - it’s a laundry list of the masses on the menu - expendable.
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2019 6:10pm
Always powerful, always polished, always special
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Re. Straw Dogs
20th Dec 2019 7:54pm
Very impressive Jade. Your refrain doesn't jar in any of the stanzas, Seamless.
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You’ve always been one of my staunchest supporters of my rhyming skills, and that’s something special & rare more & more these days - thank you, AB.🙏🏻
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22nd Dec 2019 2:40am
Oh Didier (if I may), your soulful words have caught me by surprise and leave me breathless.
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22nd Dec 2019 7:18pm
Thank you, my new friend. And yes, indeed you were. Sheer eloquence in your way of showing & expressing.
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