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Otherness
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 18th Dec 2019
Author's Note
For Admin's Dystopian Comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11155/
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Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 1:06am
Well said Ahvant ( there were some BIG words in there).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 1:11am
Thanks, Kitts! Yeah, science likes to 'define' things intellectually. We know it boils down to simple matters of the heart, and basic human needs - love being the foremost.
Re. Otherness
Anonymous
18th Dec 2019 2:06am
I'm not usually at such a loss for words lately. But the threat is real. This isn't science fiction.
Bless you for using this opportunity to bring awareness to a condition we can all help to alleviate with simple acts of kindness.
❤📝
Bless you for using this opportunity to bring awareness to a condition we can all help to alleviate with simple acts of kindness.
❤📝
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:34pm
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 2:48am
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:37pm
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 4:36am
You got me using google and rereading your poem. I learned some new grammar and the experience was actually pretty deep.
Way to give an ever present struggle a fresh face and new visibility! Very inspiring and important stuff.
Way to give an ever present struggle a fresh face and new visibility! Very inspiring and important stuff.
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:36pm
Yeah, sorry about that! But science is science and the contrast wouldn't have been made without complicated scientific terms. Not that I don't love science, I do! But, sometimes it's simply humanity that makes the difference - particularly in the case of homeless people.
Thank you for supporting me. ❤
Thank you for supporting me. ❤
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 4:37am
Whatever the facts & labels & the n-million names coming outta labs n tech n money factories aggravating the so 'otherness' you capture so perfect A...as you say..it all boils down to the one n only need .. love! Best for tge comp., Light & love dear xo:)
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:39pm
Exactly, Uma! Despite the scientific terms, love is love, and needed by all humans to survive. Thank you my dear friend! ❤
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 9:59am
Tell me 'bout it, honey.....i wrote one on the "topic" earlier.
Well
done (as all-ways)
Well
done (as all-ways)
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Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 5:08pm
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 5:33pm
Truth, beautifully and hauntingly arranged for maximum impact. I love this 💜.
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21st Dec 2019 1:43pm
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 6:48pm
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21st Dec 2019 1:44pm
Thank you, Sweet Howlings! I appreciate you and hope you have a lovely holiday. ❤
Re. Otherness
18th Dec 2019 11:28pm
Being an introvert I have never suffered from loneliness...but I see the devastating affect it is having on our societies, Science is a disconnect...great ink Vati.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:49pm
We definitely know the difference in solitude and loneliness, don't we, my friend? Unfortunately, many do not, and only suffer the destitution of isolation that so often accompanies hopelessness. This is why we should teach meditation in primary school. . .
Thank you, my friend! May your holidays we merry and bright! ❤
Thank you, my friend! May your holidays we merry and bright! ❤
Re: Re. Otherness
22nd Dec 2019 11:28pm
So very true Vati...the hardest hit by loneliness are never we introverts, it is the the extroverts who are shy...life for them can be a real struggle indeed...and yes, meditation at an early age for sure. Have a great Christmas my friend. XO
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22nd Dec 2019 11:32pm
Re. Otherness
19th Dec 2019 1:04am
It's terrifying and yet so true. I think the image of something that is current will carry well into the future because we are not doing enough.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:51pm
Thank you, Wally. We definitely aren't doing enough - and I don't know how to do more! Thank you for your support! ❤
Re. Otherness
19th Dec 2019 11:05am
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21st Dec 2019 1:52pm
Re. Otherness
I almost abandoned, due to the long words. But persisting and reaching the end, I was glad that I did persist.
Loneliness - it comes in various shades.
Spiritual loneliness, intellectual loneliness, bodily loneliness.
Loneliness - it comes in various shades.
Spiritual loneliness, intellectual loneliness, bodily loneliness.
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:54pm
Yeah, science can be pretty thick in areas, but I'm glad you kept going nonetheless, SeaCat. Thank you for your perspective. You are so correct; loneliness leaves a deficit within ourselves if we don't know how to counter it. ❤
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19th Dec 2019 6:27pm
Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:54pm
Yeah, sorry about that, poet! It's strange how science labels such basic things such as human need. Thank you for your support. ❤
Re. Otherness
20th Dec 2019 00:02am
'Otherness' seems more fatal and frequent in the cities than in the countryside - one child enters the "housing insecurity" every 8 minutes in the U.K. Dystopia is already well entrenched. The juxtapostioning of 'science' versus simple common-sense analysis was really well played out in these few powerful words.
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Re: Re. Otherness
21st Dec 2019 1:56pm
It is here too, Josh. Unfortunately, it's not part of the future but present in dire numbers. It's only going to get worse, I am afraid. Thank you for your perspective and support, my friend. ❤
Re. Otherness
22nd Dec 2019 4:50am
Its amazing, the things they try to scientifically analyze and measure, a pain scale is one thing, now loneliness. I had to look up that term you mentioned, allostatic load, and it sounds like the remedy could be, 'find your passion', but it could become tougher if everyone is feeling otherness and just wanting to conform rather than be some unique individual, it takes alot of strength to overcome that..
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Re: Re. Otherness
22nd Dec 2019 3:22pm
Thank you, PR. I think sometimes our bodies overload from stress and emotional pressures just as a machine engine can be pushed too far before it blows. Discovering one's passion is definitely the purest fuel known to humankind - but, you are right in that it takes strength to stay the course.