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note to self
if something is triggered
in your heart's longing
do not hesitate
to bare your teeth to it
take a bite
you may never get
another chance
in your heart's longing
do not hesitate
to bare your teeth to it
take a bite
you may never get
another chance
Published 16th Dec 2019
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16th Dec 2019 5:09pm
Love the brevity of this, Jeje. It's straight through the heart poetry.
One nit:
in your heart[ ' ]s longing
One nit:
in your heart[ ' ]s longing
20th Dec 2019 5:41pm
Thank you so much Ahavati for your thoughtful comments and for bringing your critique to my attention... always appreciated... I realized I had a misspelling to correct as well. Humbled and honored by the add to your RL x♡
16th Dec 2019 11:46pm
20th Dec 2019 5:41pm
17th Dec 2019 1:17am
Thank you so much Harry for the thoughtful comments and add to your RL ... greatly appreciated
Peace to you
JeJe
Peace to you
JeJe
17th Dec 2019 8:48pm
20th Dec 2019 5:43pm
Thank you so much Josh for your thoughtful comments .. always appreciated
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
19th Dec 2019 6:28pm
Well said Jeje. There is an old axiom. Feint heart never won fair lady.
When it comes to my art, I never hesitate.
When it comes to my art, I never hesitate.
20th Dec 2019 5:44pm
23rd Dec 2019 10:56am
Thanks for the inspiration...
Sometimes you just have to jump!
Loved this, jemac!
Sometimes you just have to jump!
Loved this, jemac!
Thank you so much NewBegginings for the love and feeling inspired .. :))
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
