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Language of Power
Oh - Mathematics.
What grievous mischief
have we wrought?
What grievous mischief
have we wrought?
Written by
SeaCat
Published 13th Dec 2019
| Edited 15th Feb 2020
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Re. Language of Power
13th Dec 2019 11:18pm
So true.
Many of my dreams and ambitions fall from my mind when I realize I don't have enough money to afford them.
Many of my dreams and ambitions fall from my mind when I realize I don't have enough money to afford them.
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Re: Re. Language of Power
16th Dec 2019 1:32pm
Spreadsheets and columns, juggling and recording, but the money will only go as far as it can
Re. Language of Power
Anonymous
14th Dec 2019 12:10pm
Don't be shy, SeaCat - end Line 1 with an exclamation point!
The brevity of this has the mind going off in so many directions, for it implies that we've created a monster by assigning value to meaningless indicators.
The brevity of this has the mind going off in so many directions, for it implies that we've created a monster by assigning value to meaningless indicators.
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Re: Re. Language of Power
The grievous mischief, the monster that we found, the Pandora Box that we opened, via mathematics - is nuclear. Of course, there are many mischiefs, of varying degrees of grievousness - but the one that I have in mind for this poem is the knowledge of nuclear energy. The terror and horror of the nuclear fireball.
I am mulling your suggestion for the exclamation point,
SeaCat
I am mulling your suggestion for the exclamation point,
SeaCat
Re. Language of Power
17th Dec 2019 2:51pm
Your poem reminds me of an experience from my youth.
Both my father and I worked as steel workers for the same company. The steel mill was owned by the world's largest privately owned company, Cargill. In accordance to our union contract, it was at this time of year that we were to receive profit sharing. But like every year during the 23 years that I worked there we'd get a letter attached to our weekly paycheck explaining that the company was in the red and were no profits to share.
This was the first year of employment, and after reading my letter I verbally expressed my surprise and disappointment aloud,
"If the steel mill doesn't make any money why do they keep it running? 😳
My father responded with words never forgotten.
" Kimmy, always remember, figures don't lie, but liars know how to figure. "
Both my father and I worked as steel workers for the same company. The steel mill was owned by the world's largest privately owned company, Cargill. In accordance to our union contract, it was at this time of year that we were to receive profit sharing. But like every year during the 23 years that I worked there we'd get a letter attached to our weekly paycheck explaining that the company was in the red and were no profits to share.
This was the first year of employment, and after reading my letter I verbally expressed my surprise and disappointment aloud,
"If the steel mill doesn't make any money why do they keep it running? 😳
My father responded with words never forgotten.
" Kimmy, always remember, figures don't lie, but liars know how to figure. "
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Re: Re. Language of Power
17th Dec 2019 7:15pm
Nice reminiscence - I shall remember the closing words for possible use sometime ;)
Thank you
Thank you
Re. Language of Power
28th Dec 2019 11:55pm
I strongly agree with your expression... And I enjoyed the brevity.
Einstein himself publicly expressed regret for writing FDR, urging him to create the atomic bomb - which had only been proven in theory at the time.
Nuclear energy in general is a dangerous tool to harness... One nuclear meltdown, and an area can remain uninhabitable for hundreds, if not thousands of years
I worry what the future might hold...
Keep up the great writing, SeaCat. Thank you for sharing this.
Einstein himself publicly expressed regret for writing FDR, urging him to create the atomic bomb - which had only been proven in theory at the time.
Nuclear energy in general is a dangerous tool to harness... One nuclear meltdown, and an area can remain uninhabitable for hundreds, if not thousands of years
I worry what the future might hold...
Keep up the great writing, SeaCat. Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Re. Language of Power
29th Dec 2019 6:34pm
Thank you for your comment and the RL add; I am pleased that you saw the essence of the poem.
Re: Re. Language of Power
29th Dec 2019 7:37pm