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Re. Foreshadowing
4th Dec 2019 4:40am
Foreshadowing
The longing whispers that befall
The aches of its needs I feel
Nocturnal animalistic masquerade we are
The coolness of its balm in the nature of the hunt
Conquered, ravished, marred with passionate strokes of ecstasy
Soaking in its nakedness
As refreshing rain pelts to my temple
Cleansing of its rapture, our bodies shielded, concealed, interlocked
We dance in its merriment, we fall in its surrender
Emotions asking for shelter to feel, to touch, to be
Anchoring deep within the maze of my inner mysteries
Uncontained as I drip in the abyss of pools of desires
Losing myself in the funnel of poetic cotton candy
Melting on my lips, sugary to my crown, addictive between my thighs
A dash of pure lust I spread, seasoning the hunger of his mind
Turning me on, turning me out, taking the drive of his canal submission
Yearning still as the crescendo approaches sweetly
Hips pressed down against mine
For the pleasure he provides
Here I am to receive
Foreshadowing
The longing whispers that befall
The aches of its needs I feel
Nocturnal animalistic masquerade we are
The coolness of its balm in the nature of the hunt
Conquered, ravished, marred with passionate strokes of ecstasy
Soaking in its nakedness
As refreshing rain pelts to my temple
Cleansing of its rapture, our bodies shielded, concealed, interlocked
We dance in its merriment, we fall in its surrender
Emotions asking for shelter to feel, to touch, to be
Anchoring deep within the maze of my inner mysteries
Uncontained as I drip in the abyss of pools of desires
Losing myself in the funnel of poetic cotton candy
Melting on my lips, sugary to my crown, addictive between my thighs
A dash of pure lust I spread, seasoning the hunger of his mind
Turning me on, turning me out, taking the drive of his canal submission
Yearning still as the crescendo approaches sweetly
Hips pressed down against mine
For the pleasure he provides
Here I am to receive
Foreshadowing
Re. Foreshadowing
4th Dec 2019 6:38am
Picture reminds me of Cleopatra who used to bathe in milk. An ebony Bathsheba for any watching King David.
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Re: Re. Foreshadowing
6th Dec 2019 2:17am
Yes... it is bath of goat mink and honey... the soothing properties to maintain the appearance of supple skin and yes it was a favorite pampering for many Queens, thank you for the read, Solomon_Song,
Re. Foreshadowing
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2019 9:47am
4th Dec 2019 9:46am
The true beauty and meaning of these words can only be received by he who is the recipient. For that lover, your words are deeply heartfelt and reciprocated in all their depth and cause great pleasure and, even greater love and devotion. An ever growing ecstasy is in the heart of the one whom these words are spoken for. Kisses to you my sweet Queen.
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Re: Re. Foreshadowing
6th Dec 2019 2:20am
Mm.. I could see that smile in the expression you state my handsome poet, and I truly must thank you for the read, Juvenalis66 (Juvenalis), oh yes
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Re: Re. Foreshadowing
6th Dec 2019 2:23am
I will toast to these to such beautiful adjectives, and thank you for the read, Didi3d
Re. Foreshadowing
4th Dec 2019 3:22pm
sweet lady Cocoa this is more than hot burns deep into my soul now shower would cool this down only make hotter as you do this unto me each time i read your loving words
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6th Dec 2019 2:34am
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Re. Foreshadowing
2nd Jan 2020 4:34am
"Foreshadowing"
a great word...
the setting of a mood...that ends as it should.
enjoyed your words
a great word...
the setting of a mood...that ends as it should.
enjoyed your words
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Re: Re. Foreshadowing
2nd Jan 2020 4:43am
Aww.. thank you sincerely and I will take that compliment to heart, and thank you for the read, Mysticstones