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My Weakness Other Than Chocolate
For the crimes of passion
Guilty, no bail to set me free
Sentenced me to life
For the desires of my iniquities
I was minding my on
Floating to my ears
An alluring echoing song
I followed, it was so serene, so true
Such melancholic wonders
Devoid of society blues
Enrapture of sounds
Both feet floating from off the ground
An enchanting love story
Told from a twinkling star’s point of view
My eyes mesmerized by its hidden glory
I investigated the melody of its giving
The essential of the music
Survival to one’s living
What I found out
To allow my heart to shout about
As I continued on
A Kaleidoscope to amuse, sure I’m not alone
Soft ballads to the ears
Heard over the valleys, the rivers, the oceans
Wisps of spoken whispers of its love potion
On a soft breeze noted for others to hear
A joyful noise to enwrap, others, to forget their tears
A symphonic embracer made for two
Cadence of notes to soothe the soul
When heightened emotions are on patrol
Could this be the Genie in the lamp, palms want to rub
Inoculating with soft words of Heavenly love
A male Greek Mythology Muse to seduce
Rendering speechless the mentality
Emotional pandemonium of heart induced
An euphoric high it produces, loving the ruse
When fervent hearts are let lose
As touching the helm of Jesus’ garment for a taste of salvation
Dizzy heads, heavy hearts found in its contemplation
Sentimental snares of its will’s seductive revelations
Can I please get my phone call
Archangel Michael, where are you
You were ordained to protect me from this earthly fall
Now that I have come and saw
Heart breaks as glass according to planetary laws
Can I get another phone call
Guilty, no bail to set me free
Sentenced me to life
For the desires of my iniquities
I was minding my on
Floating to my ears
An alluring echoing song
I followed, it was so serene, so true
Such melancholic wonders
Devoid of society blues
Enrapture of sounds
Both feet floating from off the ground
An enchanting love story
Told from a twinkling star’s point of view
My eyes mesmerized by its hidden glory
I investigated the melody of its giving
The essential of the music
Survival to one’s living
What I found out
To allow my heart to shout about
As I continued on
A Kaleidoscope to amuse, sure I’m not alone
Soft ballads to the ears
Heard over the valleys, the rivers, the oceans
Wisps of spoken whispers of its love potion
On a soft breeze noted for others to hear
A joyful noise to enwrap, others, to forget their tears
A symphonic embracer made for two
Cadence of notes to soothe the soul
When heightened emotions are on patrol
Could this be the Genie in the lamp, palms want to rub
Inoculating with soft words of Heavenly love
A male Greek Mythology Muse to seduce
Rendering speechless the mentality
Emotional pandemonium of heart induced
An euphoric high it produces, loving the ruse
When fervent hearts are let lose
As touching the helm of Jesus’ garment for a taste of salvation
Dizzy heads, heavy hearts found in its contemplation
Sentimental snares of its will’s seductive revelations
Can I please get my phone call
Archangel Michael, where are you
You were ordained to protect me from this earthly fall
Now that I have come and saw
Heart breaks as glass according to planetary laws
Can I get another phone call
Published 6th Dec 2019
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2019 3:30pm
My dear sweet love,
Remember that I always have you on speed-dial. Beautiful as you, this chant of love. ❤️
Remember that I always have you on speed-dial. Beautiful as you, this chant of love. ❤️
6th Dec 2019 3:35pm
Mm...as always that saucy Italian mental seduction...and speed dial is to slow...wink.. and thank you for the read...and all the addictive trimmings I get to see.. very nice my poet, very ❤️
Anonymous
6th Dec 2019 8:01pm
Only for you my sweet. Only for you. ❤️
6th Dec 2019 3:41pm
You sketch the weakness so well, in this rendering. We all have our vices. Hope Friday treats you well!
6th Dec 2019 3:54pm
I must thank you for the generosity of your moving comment, and thank you for the read my handsome poet... and enjoy your Friday
6th Dec 2019 6:28pm
Why is it that when we read you it is always refreshing, like a shower. We will return to this one, we may have saw a piece there, thanks in advance. Tight
6th Dec 2019 6:29pm
"As touching the helm of Jesus’ garment for a taste of salvation"
There is no better metaphor to describe one's desperation to be healed. Most people don't realize the significance of this woman's act. According to the law of the time, a bleeding woman was considered unclean. During their period a woman was segregated. She was not to touch a man under any conditions. Especially if she was suffering a chronic flow. Those women were completely shunned. The punishment for such a woman to touch a man, especially a rabbi, was death by stonning. Consequently, one can only imagine the desperate courage she had to touch Christ's garment.
Great job.
PS, I work at a candy factory. I've got bunch of dark chocolate peppermint Christmas bark that could curl your toes.😈
7th Dec 2019 1:04am
lady Cocoa you once again wrote of man's sin and it is beautiful the healing of the lady as Jesus said go sin no more
such sweet words
love this write
such sweet words
love this write
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