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HAIKU - STATUS QUO
Guilt pang while blade cuts
young sheared to maintain old shape
pruning the boxwood
young sheared to maintain old shape
pruning the boxwood
Published 2nd Dec 2019
Author's Note
It's a travesty how often we sacrifice the free-thinking, innovative, more humane, just, and wise thought of our youth to perpetuate antiquated bias, cruel prejudice, retrograde ideas, institutional injustice...the old guard.
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2nd Dec 2019 4:57pm
3rd Dec 2019 3:26am
2nd Dec 2019 8:53pm
Both your haiku and comment are truly eloquent, Gahdess. You have become a master of the form.
3rd Dec 2019 3:29am
Sir Crow, it is a true thrill to be read by you again. I appreciate very much your friendship and kind words of encouragement!
Anonymous
5th Dec 2019 2:24am
I totally agree, so much needs to change and the changes that do happen are often the wrong things! Life's crazy like that, unfortunately. Good spill to page dear poet.
3rd Jan 2020 5:24pm
Thank you so much, Periwinkle! I guess it's up to us to make sure we're not thrust back into the dark ages. I truly appreciate your words of encouragement.
3rd Jan 2020 00:51am
3rd Jan 2020 5:26pm
Thank you very much, Newbeginnings! I like your message-of-hope profile name...it's exactly what we need. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement.
3rd Jan 2020 7:37pm
