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Natures Bliss
I found
bliss
threaded
in
nature
and
in your
oceanic
blues
I found
peace
to strip
myself
bare
whilst you
tangle
me
in
your knots
as our
breath
rises & falls
throughout
the
twilight hours
serving
one
another
in kind
whilst
healing & sealing
wounds
unknown.
bliss
threaded
in
nature
and
in your
oceanic
blues
I found
peace
to strip
myself
bare
whilst you
tangle
me
in
your knots
as our
breath
rises & falls
throughout
the
twilight hours
serving
one
another
in kind
whilst
healing & sealing
wounds
unknown.
Published 1st Dec 2019
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1st Dec 2019 12:03pm
At least one metaphor here that is so enjoyable.
“ healing & sealing
wounds
unknown.”
Perfect end
“ healing & sealing
wounds
unknown.”
Perfect end
1st Dec 2019 12:03pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 10:45am
1st Dec 2019 8:43pm
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2nd Dec 2019 9:32pm
Those last three lines contain such power, but so does the entire work. Wonderful job!
2nd Dec 2019 9:45pm
In touch with nature, the elements and one another. It's as much erotic as it is spiritual.
Well done!
Well done!
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
4th Dec 2019 9:13pm
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14th Dec 2019 10:37pm
This is quite beautiful, shadow... Such great imagery in such a quaint little poem. Thanks for sharing! :)
