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Bliss Space
Harmonic serenade
for the space
ink alone can’t explain
can’t describe
can’t contain
Ballad for the place that surpasses understanding
connects dots as pattern
weaves insights as subtle thread
melds bodies into purest sound
Ode to the spacious grace
that holds and enfolds
sustains our breath
revels in sacred holiness
Symphonic undertone that transports
far from the land of words
to the embrace of the just beyond
the everpresent ordinary
Extraordinary.
R.
for the space
ink alone can’t explain
can’t describe
can’t contain
Ballad for the place that surpasses understanding
connects dots as pattern
weaves insights as subtle thread
melds bodies into purest sound
Ode to the spacious grace
that holds and enfolds
sustains our breath
revels in sacred holiness
Symphonic undertone that transports
far from the land of words
to the embrace of the just beyond
the everpresent ordinary
Extraordinary.
R.
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Re. Bliss Space
24th Nov 2019 2:35pm
We live the extraordinary life when we choose love, Rachelle. This poem is filled with the essence of it. Far from the land of words is what we all strive for. Lovely verse.
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6th Dec 2019 3:57am
Such truth in that! ♥️ May we all experience that wordless wonder.
🙏🏽, R.
🙏🏽, R.
Re. Bliss Space
25th Nov 2019 8:55pm
The real stuff can't be nailed down, thankfully - it's its own free agent, for those who dare.
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6th Dec 2019 3:59am
The daring is where is it at, huh?!.. :). Thanks for popping in, Josh -glad there was resonance! :), Rachelle
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2nd Dec 2019 9:39am
I love to write as well, have my own poetry but this is realy wonderful..
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1st Dec 2019 5:59pm
Thanks, Didier-Glad it sang for you!.. so much of the good stuff is wordless and best encapsulated in the 🎼🎹🥁of it all. ♥️, R.
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Re. Bliss Space
20th Jan 2020 4:45am
Reading this for a third time... this is awesome, Rachelle! Excellent writing.
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Re: Re. Bliss Space
21st Jan 2020 2:28pm
Ahh, I love a good re-read. Always see a different layer :). Thank you so much for the honor of your time and your kind words! Rachelle
Re. Bliss Space
1st Feb 2020 4:39am
We always love because it makes feel good to share our life with someone.
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9th Feb 2020 4:42pm