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In the case of Me versus Addiction
I'd love to know
what scared me so much
about myself
to have ended up
parked in a lay-by
chasing my life away
God knows I was on top
of the world
thought I had it beat
some poems back
but in the end
my mind wasn't with it
took weeks
for it to catch up
and I'd love to tell you
'bout how much hell turkey was
but I honestly don't remember
the worst of it
this time
couldn't even tell you
how long it's been
I can tell you this though
I never hit rock bottom
'til I came off it
what scared me so much
about myself
to have ended up
parked in a lay-by
chasing my life away
God knows I was on top
of the world
thought I had it beat
some poems back
but in the end
my mind wasn't with it
took weeks
for it to catch up
and I'd love to tell you
'bout how much hell turkey was
but I honestly don't remember
the worst of it
this time
couldn't even tell you
how long it's been
I can tell you this though
I never hit rock bottom
'til I came off it
Written by
lepperochan
(Craic-Dealer)
Published 23rd Nov 2019
| Edited 26th Nov 2019
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Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2019 2:01am
You’re a testament to the fact you keep on bouncing back. We’ll start calling you the comeback kid.
We still love ya, fella. Regardless.
And that poetry, well that’s not to shabby either. But the real is what you do well.
I’d say thank you for sharing, but I’d mean thank you for living even more.
-M
We still love ya, fella. Regardless.
And that poetry, well that’s not to shabby either. But the real is what you do well.
I’d say thank you for sharing, but I’d mean thank you for living even more.
-M
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 11:05am
Hullo
comeback kid is better than basketball. thanks, lady
and thanks for the read and love, appreciate it muchley
comeback kid is better than basketball. thanks, lady
and thanks for the read and love, appreciate it muchley
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 3:09am
Addiction is ridiculous. Its also unpredictable. And most definitely thee hardest thing in my life. All of my addictions. Hugs and love to you <3
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 11:07am
Hullo
I bet you're a happy drunk at least :)-
many thanks for your visit and thoughts, lady
I bet you're a happy drunk at least :)-
many thanks for your visit and thoughts, lady
Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
24th Nov 2019 1:01am
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 1:01pm
You hit bottom and you bounce back up, this is how this shit works.
Reflective poem because I dont know one person who hasnt been there.
Reflective poem because I dont know one person who hasnt been there.
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 2:38pm
Hullo
wise words, lady
as yazoo sang with her plastic population: the only way is up :)-
thanks much for thoughts, lady
wise words, lady
as yazoo sang with her plastic population: the only way is up :)-
thanks much for thoughts, lady
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 1:58pm
Such strength in You gives me pride Lepp.
To ride today clean thinking/feeling yesterdays tug...what a MF!!!
To know You've gone and are going through such pain breaks my heart...The good should never suffer such.
I am just grateful You are still here with us and fighting the good battle, god knows I'll always be at Your side...couldn't think of You not by mine.
This Write pens the anguish down to a T
To express is to understand and inspect, to express it openly is to accept.
Not everyone can jump such hurdles, let alone try...yet there You are-Always at it !!!
To ride today clean thinking/feeling yesterdays tug...what a MF!!!
To know You've gone and are going through such pain breaks my heart...The good should never suffer such.
I am just grateful You are still here with us and fighting the good battle, god knows I'll always be at Your side...couldn't think of You not by mine.
This Write pens the anguish down to a T
To express is to understand and inspect, to express it openly is to accept.
Not everyone can jump such hurdles, let alone try...yet there You are-Always at it !!!
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
23rd Nov 2019 2:42pm
Hullo
one of those things, man. no matter how high the hurdle someone somewhere has a whole line of taller ones to jump
one doesn't have to look far
kudos, G
thanks bunches for your thoughts
one of those things, man. no matter how high the hurdle someone somewhere has a whole line of taller ones to jump
one doesn't have to look far
kudos, G
thanks bunches for your thoughts
Anonymous
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24th Nov 2019 10:36am
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
24th Nov 2019 11:41am
Hullo
very kind of you to say, circusmonkey, and kinder still to drop by in first place. much appreciated
very kind of you to say, circusmonkey, and kinder still to drop by in first place. much appreciated
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
24th Nov 2019 5:53pm
A chara....
Indeed--a sincerely , straightforward piece...penned with the honest expressions of such an intense, personal struggle! i cannot imagine, when faced with such a relentless, indomitable "enemy", the amount of inner-strength required, to emerge victorious! Your courage, and fortitude.....bring both inspiration, and hope to all those faced with any type of destructive addictions!
While i am sad that you have been experiencing such extreme difficulty, I am ever sooo glad, and most grateful, that you continue to fight this fight! more often than not, life has a way of presenting unexpected, seemingly insurmountable challenges our way! Those are the types that leave us with no alternative solutions....because...sometimes....the only way thru ....is way thru! And You are so surely a remarkable example of THIS!
May each day become easier!!! My veRRy best to You--ALWAYS!
Enchangtress
Indeed--a sincerely , straightforward piece...penned with the honest expressions of such an intense, personal struggle! i cannot imagine, when faced with such a relentless, indomitable "enemy", the amount of inner-strength required, to emerge victorious! Your courage, and fortitude.....bring both inspiration, and hope to all those faced with any type of destructive addictions!
While i am sad that you have been experiencing such extreme difficulty, I am ever sooo glad, and most grateful, that you continue to fight this fight! more often than not, life has a way of presenting unexpected, seemingly insurmountable challenges our way! Those are the types that leave us with no alternative solutions....because...sometimes....the only way thru ....is way thru! And You are so surely a remarkable example of THIS!
May each day become easier!!! My veRRy best to You--ALWAYS!
Enchangtress
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
25th Nov 2019 3:28am
Hullo
hard to respond to such lovely comment. firstly, welcome back, a chàra
thanks heaps n bunches for dropping by and leaving your thoughts
hard to respond to such lovely comment. firstly, welcome back, a chàra
thanks heaps n bunches for dropping by and leaving your thoughts
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
24th Nov 2019 11:33pm
I won't go too hard into grammar and all that as I'm sure you'll clean that up if and when you feel like it. The poem works as a sincere statement of rising from the bottom and realising how painful that can be. I'd like to see it re-worked as a short story, honestly, as I think in prose narrative form it would hit even harder.
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
26th Nov 2019 12:51pm
Jack, hullo
thought about the short story, might still try knock one out. thanks for the other stuff, I'd completely overlooked it. god bless copy paste:)-
tha6for your thoughts, man
thought about the short story, might still try knock one out. thanks for the other stuff, I'd completely overlooked it. god bless copy paste:)-
tha6for your thoughts, man
Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
26th Nov 2019 2:11pm
Just seen one I missed, corrected here:
"but I honestly don't remember"
"but I honestly don't remember"
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
26th Nov 2019 2:30pm
Anonymous
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25th Nov 2019 7:29am
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
26th Nov 2019 2:32pm
Ethan, good greetings
gripped is a pretty good words for it. always forward, man. like an emu
thanks for your thoughts, man
gripped is a pretty good words for it. always forward, man. like an emu
thanks for your thoughts, man
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
2nd Dec 2019 6:17am
Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
2nd Dec 2019 1:35pm
Kate, g'day
welcome back. your presence has also been missed
thanks for dropping by, lady
welcome back. your presence has also been missed
thanks for dropping by, lady
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
6th Dec 2019 11:14pm
I admire your strength, although.. .
As always, i feel your lettered thoughts
As always, i feel your lettered thoughts
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Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
8th Dec 2019 11:22pm
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28th Dec 2019 11:13am
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
28th Dec 2019 1:30pm
Hullo and welcome
found your comment wonderful to read, and easy too so good stuff on your english
appreciate much your visit and thoughts good sir and I hope your stay here is long and fruitful
*hat tip*
found your comment wonderful to read, and easy too so good stuff on your english
appreciate much your visit and thoughts good sir and I hope your stay here is long and fruitful
*hat tip*
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
12th Jan 2020 10:30pm
Rock bottoms a hard place brother, glad your on the rise man, I do enjoy reading a story
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
13th Jan 2020 2:02pm
Hullo, BigG and welcome to DUP
thanks much for stopping by and leaving your thoughts
may your stay here be most productive
thanks much for stopping by and leaving your thoughts
may your stay here be most productive
Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
13th Jan 2020 11:01am
A great introspective piece... I really liked this lepp :)
You live, you learn!
You live, you learn!
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Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
13th Jan 2020 2:06pm
Hullo, good person!!
terribly sorry I missed your earlier comment. bit absent headed sometimes
lesson learned indeed, haha (til next time)
thanks much for your presence and words, N.B
terribly sorry I missed your earlier comment. bit absent headed sometimes
lesson learned indeed, haha (til next time)
thanks much for your presence and words, N.B
Re: Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
13th Jan 2020 5:44pm
That's okay. I usually end up making my way back to these poems one way or another. I just figured I'd comment again to let you know I'm back for another read, you know?
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Anonymous
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12th Feb 2020 9:05pm
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Re. In the case of Me versus Addiction
21st Jan 2023 7:01pm
And sometimes we must hit that rock bottom pretty in order to finally come to our senses. Respect, Robert.
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