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The Key
You found it
The key
I thought was lost
It opens up
What’s inside
Under my skin
Every fear
Secret
I’ve held
Unlocking me
Is the easy part
What follows might not be
So many emotions
Hard to control
So obsessive
Love is
A very fine line
Towards madness
The thoughts rage
In every
Waking moment
Would willingly
Fall
Into insanity
If I had
The key
To your heart to
The key
I thought was lost
It opens up
What’s inside
Under my skin
Every fear
Secret
I’ve held
Unlocking me
Is the easy part
What follows might not be
So many emotions
Hard to control
So obsessive
Love is
A very fine line
Towards madness
The thoughts rage
In every
Waking moment
Would willingly
Fall
Into insanity
If I had
The key
To your heart to
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Re. The Key
19th Nov 2019 4:56am
These lines jumped out, and really resonate with me. Another lovely write, AP 💜
Unlocking me
Is the easy part
What follows might not be
Unlocking me
Is the easy part
What follows might not be
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Re. The Key
19th Nov 2019 5:15am
Oh! Also, I completely forgot to say - the shape of the poem - it reminds of the profile of a key! Lol, sorry; brain fog 😅
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Re: Re. The Key
19th Nov 2019 5:48am
That was a complete fluke there was no intention to show a profile of a key this is how it came out
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19th Nov 2019 5:56am
Oh, no I didn’t mean I thought it was intentional; I apologize, I have synesthesia and sometimes the shape of words gives me images, and I just meant I thought it was really cool since it matched the name of the poem 🙂.
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19th Nov 2019 6:25am
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19th Nov 2019 11:15am
I adore the tenderness contained within this heartfelt piece; just beautiful... 🌻
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2019 12:31pm
I enjoyed your comparison of love to madness. The ending was a nice unexpected switch of focus onto the object of your obsession.
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19th Nov 2019 5:08pm
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