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Ask In Prayer His Will
When treated unfairly by the self-centered,
remember that His ways are much better
than fair, which are in a heart like His Spirit.
When He lifts thee up, trust His mighty hand,
He will take care the things that disturb thee
at the right time in thy life that will be.
As thee sits quietly in His Presence,
thy awareness of His Life within thee
is heightened, and fulfills all that is seen.
Sit quietly with Him, letting all thy
frets & fears bubble up, a mind set free
as the surface thy vigilance awaits.
Remember that His tenderness for thee
is perfect, unfailing... ask the Spirit,
help grant thee with His endless fidelity.
‘Till with Him, we learn even as we speak
elsewhere, when a friend trusts implicitly,
giving each, heart & heartache a full berth,
thee is then standing atop sacred earth.
Being instead disheartened by the plight,
this blue planet spinning, He wants us as
bright lights shining in a winter’s darkness.
Each is in a tranquil place in hardship’s
discipline, even as it is painful
at the time, later it yields the faithful;
abiding, bears fruit within virtue’s praise.
Published 14th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Entered in wallyroo’s ‘Gone Missing’ ( the missing vowel )
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
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14th Nov 2019 6:55pm
Thank you so much, sister Skyblue2 for such thoughtful words. <3
Blessed and blessings,
Kathy
Blessed and blessings,
Kathy
14th Nov 2019 10:03pm
Amazing soundscape produced by the poem on having no 'o'-vowels. I'm sure that took some figuring out. I accord with the sentiments. Nice work. Josh.
15th Nov 2019 10:24am
Thank you Josh I'm very grateful for how you explained the way you worked your way through the piece and your thoughts on what I expressed - very meaningful to me.
As for figuring out the issue of not having use of all the vowels: I wrote the piece in its entirety before I decided I would revise it to fit the them of Wallyroo's competition. It was almost immediate which vowel to sacrifice, and did the appropriate editing from there, beginning to end. That's not to say it was easy-going after that but it did allow me to know exactly where I wanted to go.
Blessed and blessings
Kathy
As for figuring out the issue of not having use of all the vowels: I wrote the piece in its entirety before I decided I would revise it to fit the them of Wallyroo's competition. It was almost immediate which vowel to sacrifice, and did the appropriate editing from there, beginning to end. That's not to say it was easy-going after that but it did allow me to know exactly where I wanted to go.
Blessed and blessings
Kathy
14th Nov 2019 10:18pm
so spiritually uplifting for the soul of the heart for through him all is made possible...SHALOM
15th Nov 2019 10:30am
Thank you very much Stoney for your kind words and the RL add. I did feel this one deeply and wrote it joyfully.
And yes indeed... all is truly made possible even in the worst of times.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
And yes indeed... all is truly made possible even in the worst of times.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
15th Nov 2019 1:50pm
THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS LOVELY AND INSPIRING PIECE OF WORK AND YOUR WELCOME DEAR SOUL...RESPECT
15th Nov 2019 3:20pm
A wonderful compilation, Kathy! Well composed despite the missing vowel! Best of luck in the comp!
Thank you every so kindly dear One. Stretching myself depending on the competitons, I find myself working through a tentative time of writing that needs prodding from time to time. Challenges help wake me up and deal with more around me than being inspired to serious composing. xo
Kathy 🙏🏻
Kathy 🙏🏻
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- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
15th Nov 2019 7:51pm
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16th Nov 2019 2:04pm
My gratitude dear Ethan for your generosity of time and words. I often find myself light-headed for reasons I try to capture as I compose. You are a blessing, as I am blessed to call you a friend.🙏🏻
Kathy
Kathy
Enlightening yet compelling, dear Kathy. So much weighing down upon us from all directions seemingly in these times. Yet the opportunity is always there almost within reach. It’s easy to forget in the distraction, that’s why the need for guidance.
Best wishes in the challenge.
Best wishes in the challenge.
15th Nov 2019 11:15pm
Strength in Faith, much can be said to that subject and yet no easy feat for the everyday person.
So again Strength ...this time of character, shines through this piece.
Flowing Write that reads easily.
So again Strength ...this time of character, shines through this piece.
Flowing Write that reads easily.
I'm honored by my new friend Soul's words of truth. To your appreciation do I bow.🙏🏻
Kathy
Kathy
