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the dark dare
you're a fucker and I know it
let's not play
let's own it
I'm not much fun really
just an old whore who knows how to manipulate
cat and mouse...
you're the hunter dripping perversion
I can't be the victim
though I really want to be
see that's the problem
I'm willing...
I am your sweet little girl
no, but I want to be
rage filled my soul
contaminated me
I roamed the nights alone...age three
I dared the night
come get me!
the dark was afraid of me
I challenged it
it took a step back
a little girl with a warped dream
just wanted to be wanted
by anybody
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Re. the dark dare
Anonymous
14th Nov 2019 3:10am
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 3:12am
thank you beautiful Sky this is part of my truth a little girl age three abandoned...I love you that you shine your light on this dark write moves me deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 3:20am
We read this and thought of the other piece of being abandoned. We like this a lot, it makes us think of something else. Tight
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 3:21am
tell me Me what it makes you think of I'm curious...thank you for sharing your thoughts here...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
14th Nov 2019 3:26am
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 3:28am
thank you dearest poet for your understanding...poems like this frighten me with their honesty... I deeply appreciate your presence and thoughts here...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 4:32am
Warped dreams of strength. The hunter dripping perversion was a great line.
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 12:16pm
thank you dearest Tender One for the love here it's deeply felt...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 12:18pm
RAW AND UNCUT THIS IS LIFE FOR SOME LIVING WITHIN THE SHADOWS OF DARKNESS JUST LOOKING TO BELONG NO MATTER THE COST TO LIFE, THIS IS VERY WELL WRITTEN AS WELL AS IT IS DARK AND DEEP WITH PASSION AND SOUL OF A LOST GIRL WITHIN A WORLD OF THE UNKNOWN...RESPECT TO THE PEN
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 12:20pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney for sharing your deep thoughts on this very dark truth of mine...I was abandoned at three and it affected my mind...I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 12:27pm
SORRY TO HEAR THAT HAPPEN TO YOU BUT THROUGH LIFE WE LEARN OUR WEAKNESS AS WELL AS OUR STRENGTH, FOR ITS TRUE WHAT THEY SAY I AM A WITNESS IF YOU SURVIVE THROUGH THE STORM, THEN THE RAIN IS MERELY TEARS FALLING DOWN ONES FACE GIVING YOU COURAGE THAT YOU NEVER EVEN KNEW THAT YOU HAD WITHIN YOUR SPIRITUAL SOUL...RESPECT DEAR SOUL YOU ARE MORE STRONGER BECAUSE OF YOUR JOURNEY THROUGH LIFE...WINK
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 1:58pm
Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 1:09pm
It is clear the many individuals here at DUP care for/about you. Focus on that caring and change the narritive.
luv's,
buddhakitty.
luv's,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 5:10pm
Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 5:29pm
Plase keep in mind- you are not broken, you are not defective. A persons past does not have to be their future.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 6:31pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
14th Nov 2019 4:21pm
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Re: Re. the dark dare
14th Nov 2019 5:11pm
thank you dearest SKyblue for the love here I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤