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Story Poem, Nr.18 — King's Carousel
The executioner stood rehearsing in a dismal fog
swinging his axe down hard upon a log
of stately proportions.
This was one that had to be good,
right first time, neat, complete
in one simplistic blow.
His client had reached the top
no place left to go, ‘cept
upwards in a heavenly flow, though she,
the executioner thought,
desired not at all to know this sort
of early morning awakening.
“It will bode well for me”
the Queen thought expectantly, watching
from her after-midnight cell
“The executioner practises his art so well, and
freely I shall be released
to the next life, arriving, concise,
discover how fully distorted their theology,
how contorted their apology will be.
Last rites duly administered, but not for me and
my soul, rather for the King’s, who with the Bishop’s
seal of authority in the rings
will stamp it down, hard, upon my waxen hair.
I do not wish to be their fare, do not
want to submit to their carefully wrought
scheming, but there’s no redeeming this one now”.
The Queen, lead out, head held high
for the gasping people to spy her beauty first-hand:
last chance before she took to the sky.
The King, observing on a
royal chair from a distance, looked on
with grim satisfaction at what his persistence
had achieved. Hand-in-hand with the new
Queen-to-be, she realised a son would
have to be soonly given, else she too might likewise
be so similarly riven.
Black hood pulled down, Queen prepared on
block, Bishop sickly teetering on the
brink of self-denial at his compliance: the
bloody scene all set for the sudden final silence.
A beautiful bird flew low, startling few
twix’d eyes so otherwise fixed, as axe was
raised, crowd not breathing then
all dazed as axe came down to mark the
transfer of the crown, the bird valiantly
swooped surely there and with talons gently lifted
the head’s estate, dangling by her long golden hair:
was flown by intervention of the gods
dripping blood across the crowds
to where the King sat,
applauding no more, but in astonishment
as the bird drops the Queen’s head
into his lap …. dead.
The King, splatted with the blood of
her finery, forced to look up close and
personal at his handiwork done so considerably
in an incomplete manner, dumps head
upon the waiting queen and rushes away
from the scene to his royal chamber, where,
kneeling before a lesser god he did remember,
implores, beseeches, wishes this was all a rehearsal,
not too late to change the time, amend
direction of events, a reversal to reconsider
his soul agenda – pushed away a thought of hell,
and thought, rather ill, of a chance to climb up onto
a different carousel.
swinging his axe down hard upon a log
of stately proportions.
This was one that had to be good,
right first time, neat, complete
in one simplistic blow.
His client had reached the top
no place left to go, ‘cept
upwards in a heavenly flow, though she,
the executioner thought,
desired not at all to know this sort
of early morning awakening.
“It will bode well for me”
the Queen thought expectantly, watching
from her after-midnight cell
“The executioner practises his art so well, and
freely I shall be released
to the next life, arriving, concise,
discover how fully distorted their theology,
how contorted their apology will be.
Last rites duly administered, but not for me and
my soul, rather for the King’s, who with the Bishop’s
seal of authority in the rings
will stamp it down, hard, upon my waxen hair.
I do not wish to be their fare, do not
want to submit to their carefully wrought
scheming, but there’s no redeeming this one now”.
The Queen, lead out, head held high
for the gasping people to spy her beauty first-hand:
last chance before she took to the sky.
The King, observing on a
royal chair from a distance, looked on
with grim satisfaction at what his persistence
had achieved. Hand-in-hand with the new
Queen-to-be, she realised a son would
have to be soonly given, else she too might likewise
be so similarly riven.
Black hood pulled down, Queen prepared on
block, Bishop sickly teetering on the
brink of self-denial at his compliance: the
bloody scene all set for the sudden final silence.
A beautiful bird flew low, startling few
twix’d eyes so otherwise fixed, as axe was
raised, crowd not breathing then
all dazed as axe came down to mark the
transfer of the crown, the bird valiantly
swooped surely there and with talons gently lifted
the head’s estate, dangling by her long golden hair:
was flown by intervention of the gods
dripping blood across the crowds
to where the King sat,
applauding no more, but in astonishment
as the bird drops the Queen’s head
into his lap …. dead.
The King, splatted with the blood of
her finery, forced to look up close and
personal at his handiwork done so considerably
in an incomplete manner, dumps head
upon the waiting queen and rushes away
from the scene to his royal chamber, where,
kneeling before a lesser god he did remember,
implores, beseeches, wishes this was all a rehearsal,
not too late to change the time, amend
direction of events, a reversal to reconsider
his soul agenda – pushed away a thought of hell,
and thought, rather ill, of a chance to climb up onto
a different carousel.
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