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Morning Magic
Published 10th Nov 2019
Author's Note
I love that egregious used to be good but is now seen as bad - so flexible
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10th Nov 2019 1:12pm
loved ever line spoken for that morning magic leaves you breathless with hearts racing...nicely done
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11th Nov 2019 1:44am
So arousing to hear a defeat referred to as splendid. The magic could be seen among these verses.
15th Nov 2019 1:17am
The defeat was never more beautiful than in this luscious poem. You take me from the sublimity of morning mists to the carnality of morning sex. And I must say you do it so well, like none other. To wake up to such a poem makes your defeat inevitable in its glory.
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John
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