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That Moment
Published 5th Nov 2019
Author's Note
My own reinterpretation of the feelings a gentleman shared about me with me
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5th Nov 2019 11:26am
a very passionate exchange for the mind and soul an expression of deepness from the heart of a man...nicely written
5th Nov 2019 4:03pm
5th Nov 2019 5:12pm
IT IS I THAT IS THANKFUL FOR YOU SHARING YOUR SILENT THOUGHTS OF THAT MOMENT...RESPECT
5th Nov 2019 11:53am
It is in the feel, the connection, souls melding into one another as inhibition opens her gate
5th Nov 2019 4:00pm
5th Nov 2019 2:07pm
WARNING: This poem is so hot, while reading it my contact lenses began to melt. 🔥
5th Nov 2019 3:59pm
5th Nov 2019 2:14pm
when man and women feel the sensual touch of their mate upon them is like no other feeling in the world it can not be put into words the feeling is far be on them.
just beautiful
just beautiful
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6th Nov 2019 1:14am
The smolder of desire here left me breathless. The intensity of your hands on hips leading to your panties falling on the floor with that brilliant tongue in cheek rhyme had me aching in the most pleasurable way.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
6th Nov 2019 7:35pm
