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Heaven and Earth
( a Quatern )
I always have my head amongst the stars,
The times on zoysia in tropic climes.
The full moon’s zinc of silver’s phase ajar,
I drift into a lunar haze of rhyme.
A graceful zeppelin ghosting overhead,
I always have my head amongst the stars.
On zinnias and orchids for a bed,
The next stop in my dreams will soon be Mars.
I’ll live on clams zucchini, zwieback chars,
Become a raving zealot from the storm.
I always have my head amongst the stars,
And wear a jet black zibeline for warmth.
While drawing plans a ziggurat I’ll make,
I’m keeping shrunken Martian heads in jars.
A tower’s zenith leads to Heaven’s Gate,
I always have my head amongst the stars.
I always have my head amongst the stars,
The times on zoysia in tropic climes.
The full moon’s zinc of silver’s phase ajar,
I drift into a lunar haze of rhyme.
A graceful zeppelin ghosting overhead,
I always have my head amongst the stars.
On zinnias and orchids for a bed,
The next stop in my dreams will soon be Mars.
I’ll live on clams zucchini, zwieback chars,
Become a raving zealot from the storm.
I always have my head amongst the stars,
And wear a jet black zibeline for warmth.
While drawing plans a ziggurat I’ll make,
I’m keeping shrunken Martian heads in jars.
A tower’s zenith leads to Heaven’s Gate,
I always have my head amongst the stars.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 26th Oct 2019
| Edited 5th Nov 2019
Author's Note
For the letter “Z”.
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Re. Heaven and Earth
Re. Heaven and Earth
26th Oct 2019 7:40pm
Re: Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 2:06am
Thank you greatly, Hunter my friend, for your enthusiastic reception - most infectious, has now given me the smiles.🐯
Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 1:22am
well, you made that one look quite easy! smooth moves, miss jade
this line? had me purring:
"The full moon’s zinc of silver’s phase ajar,
this line? had me purring:
"The full moon’s zinc of silver’s phase ajar,
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Re: Re. Heaven and Earth
I just logged back on the site a few minutes ago, and saw this, your purrr-fectly delightful comment right off.
I thank you for your visits - always filled with your pleasant helpfulness & observations, and easy, quirky humor.
🐾
An afterthought as a p.s.—
“well, you made that one look quite easy!”
...the “ease” is accomplished with mirrors.👩🏻💻🤳🏻
I thank you for your visits - always filled with your pleasant helpfulness & observations, and easy, quirky humor.
🐾
An afterthought as a p.s.—
“well, you made that one look quite easy!”
...the “ease” is accomplished with mirrors.👩🏻💻🤳🏻
Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 1:53am
Agree, you are terrific at rising to these challenges. Love the essence of the piece as a whole, and the details as I absorb them by line and stanza.
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Re: Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 2:36am
My gracious thanks, Daniel.
But wait.
Should I admit to a wave of giddiness received at the reception of your appreciation? Your support of our fellow colleague’s words?
Is this why I have the urge to play with my favorite catnip ball?
But wait.
Should I admit to a wave of giddiness received at the reception of your appreciation? Your support of our fellow colleague’s words?
Is this why I have the urge to play with my favorite catnip ball?
Re: Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 3:17am
Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 5:51am
Always thoroughly enjoy your quaterns. This was one had an epic feel with a sense of wonder. It kind of reminded me of Smashing Pumkins' Tonight music video for some reason.
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Re: Re. Heaven and Earth
27th Oct 2019 1:10pm
‘The impossible is possible tonight!’
Thank you, brother Wally... we’re connected!...🤜🤛
Thank you, brother Wally... we’re connected!...🤜🤛
Re. Heaven and Earth
29th Oct 2019 3:52am
Dear JP,
Oh mighty Queen of Quatern’s!
Not only finding “Z” words but then limiting them in this format is zuper zawesome!
Bowing (because if I curtsy I’m pretty sure I won’t be able to get up) to your genius. Good luck in the comp! Excellent write! H🌷
Oh mighty Queen of Quatern’s!
Not only finding “Z” words but then limiting them in this format is zuper zawesome!
Bowing (because if I curtsy I’m pretty sure I won’t be able to get up) to your genius. Good luck in the comp! Excellent write! H🌷
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Re: Re. Heaven and Earth
5th Nov 2019 1:01pm
OMGosh, I knew there was a comment From you I missed, but then I forgot where I’d seen it. After fter looking high & low I’ve finally found you!
Soooo... we eez crazzzy for zee zed words, eh?🤗
And thank you, dear H... I’m so glad you enjoy my ‘terns!
tiger hugs,
Jade 🐾
Soooo... we eez crazzzy for zee zed words, eh?🤗
And thank you, dear H... I’m so glad you enjoy my ‘terns!
tiger hugs,
Jade 🐾