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love I never had
every day i see her around
every day she passes by
i try to talk but my lips are seald with solem sadness
I start to bleed tears down my eyes
i start to think
what does she want that i dont have
everything
every day she passes by
i try to talk but my lips are seald with solem sadness
I start to bleed tears down my eyes
i start to think
what does she want that i dont have
everything
Published 23rd Dec 2011
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2011 1:52am
Short yet to the point...its sad when the one you love does not love you back :( you have expressed the emotion well
Anonymous
25th Dec 2011 2:16am
its always sorry when the one we love does not love us back a short but good poem
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10th Jan 2012 11:35pm
Enjoyed how great you are at conveying your emotions in such a short poem. Thank you for sharing :)
28th May 2012 5:57am
