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stardust
jealously simmers then fades
you miss the good times with him that's all it is
days when you smiled and laughed
simpler days before hurt entered in
let go of what is no more
love gets more complicated as you go
there'll be days in the sun
and laughter too
nights when you chase dreams together
mornings when all you can do is cry
don't hold on too tightly and damage what's already beautiful
because there isn't another relationship like this one
unique personalities are woven intricately in this universe:
they are specially chosen
remember a person to sojourn with is priceless
walking as one through the good times and bad
a friend, a confidant, is my stepson
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 19th Oct 2019
| Edited 20th Oct 2019
Author's Note
written about my close friend my thirty-two year old stepson ❤
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 7:52pm
Re: Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 9:02pm
thank you graciously beautiful Howlings for the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 8:51pm
" love gets more complicated as you go " <<<<<----- solid truth and wisdom, here
Having a stepson,
i know the of the honor it is to being granted the opportunity to love and grow with him
Wonderful spill, Brenda
Having a stepson,
i know the of the honor it is to being granted the opportunity to love and grow with him
Wonderful spill, Brenda
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Re: Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 9:04pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen for the love on this write it's hard when you are not their best friend anymore and even though it is inevitable kind of don't need you as much anymore...
I deeply appreciate you sharing...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you sharing...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 9:11pm
i believe, for me, maybe the inevitable has come to pass as i rarely chat or see my stepson anymore.
My stepdaughter on the other hand ..........
Still,
i miss the good times i had with my autistic stepson
My stepdaughter on the other hand ..........
Still,
i miss the good times i had with my autistic stepson
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Re: Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 9:13pm
I'm glad you are still close with your stepdaughter...with people it's like the seasons things change ❤
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 9:00pm
Re: Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 9:05pm
thank you graciously beautiful Niki for the love here... I think the people who come into our lives are not mere coincidences but there for a reason... I deeply appreciate your thoughts here...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. stardust
19th Oct 2019 10:01pm
this is beautifully written with warmth and understanding with respect yeah they grow up and move on with there lives but they always remember the love that you instilled within there heart for we do miss the days when they were young but always remember the love never dies it just goes on to be share as the love that you gave them...
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Re: Re. stardust
21st Oct 2019 1:27pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney for your beautiful insight and wisdom on this poem...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. stardust
21st Oct 2019 5:56pm
Re. stardust
20th Oct 2019 3:37am
Time is cruel in the way it changes relationships..... feeling this write tonight, for my own reasons. I'm not good at letting go.
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Re: Re. stardust
21st Oct 2019 1:29pm
thank you beautiful poetess I feel you I'm not good at letting go either... everyone says people are sometimes in your life for a season I just don't get that... I deeply appreciate you sharing your own pain with me...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. stardust
21st Oct 2019 1:30pm
thank you graciously dearest Ethan I hope we can too... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. stardust
20th Oct 2019 11:21am
Finding or being gifted close ones-these lights in life cover every emotion at any given time tis depth1!!
Beautiful heart found here!!!
Beautiful heart found here!!!
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Re: Re. stardust
21st Oct 2019 1:31pm
thank you dearest Soul for sharing your beautiful thoughts on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹