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Not Quite Haiku
I
June
opens her
eyes...
butterfly
wings
fluttering...
scenting
the breeze
with summer
II
Tide of
stars
in sky
She/he is
a bottle
of saki...
her/his plums
intoxicate
Published 19th Oct 2019
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19th Oct 2019 3:52pm
19th Oct 2019 4:21pm
19th Oct 2019 5:14pm
LOL @ the title too! Excellent!
Tide of stars - just wow! I wish I had thought of that!
I love warm saki! There's a plum wine too that's excellent, but can't recall the name of it offhand. Truly enjoyed these, Kitts! xo
Tide of stars - just wow! I wish I had thought of that!
I love warm saki! There's a plum wine too that's excellent, but can't recall the name of it offhand. Truly enjoyed these, Kitts! xo
19th Oct 2019 6:24pm
Thank you Ahvanti. Im am pleased that you enjoyed it.
royal hugs,
buddhakitty.
royal hugs,
buddhakitty.
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- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
20th Oct 2019 4:09am
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20th Oct 2019 6:06am
Dear BK,
This is a lovely foray into something different. I’m inspired by this to try something new. I won’t as I’m too lazy, but I love you did it ;-). I liked seeing stars in my minds eye while a warm breeze swept through my hair.
Pretty! H🌷
This is a lovely foray into something different. I’m inspired by this to try something new. I won’t as I’m too lazy, but I love you did it ;-). I liked seeing stars in my minds eye while a warm breeze swept through my hair.
Pretty! H🌷
