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...and the blind one sang
and the blind one sang
of colors
he felt
when life
dealt
him joy
and he sang
of a canvas
with texture
that erupted
of emotions
and leapt
past boundaries
of light
and sight
oh the height
of pleasure
oh the heights
of pleasure
and the blind man sang
of pebbles
being dropped
in ponds
ripples
making landfall
under his eye
he cries
they said
and he sang
the blind man
he sang
not possible
not plausible
they said
yet he sang
of sight
beyond the eyes
that see
and reflect
.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xHP2GgxYddY
Published 15th Oct 2019
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15th Oct 2019 4:04pm
THIS IS SO EMBRACING TO THE SPIRIT OF THE SOUL IT IS A WONDERFUL THING WHEN YOU LOSE ONE PART OF BEING HUMAN, THE MOST HIGHEST SPIRITUAL SOUL GIVES YOU THE SAME ABILITY TO SEE THROUGH EYES OF BLINDNESS TO SEE THE WORLD NOT UNCHANGED BUT AS ONE REMEMBERS...BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN LOVED THE FLOW OF THE INSIGHT
15th Oct 2019 4:35pm
15th Oct 2019 8:32pm
15th Oct 2019 9:13pm
So effortlessly beautiful. A person who sees more than the eyes will allow has the purest of hearts. So stunning.
16th Oct 2019 00:16am
Fuze...have you heard Michel Colombier's, "Morning is Come Again/ For Those Who Cannot Hear"
I would very much like to hear what you think...I think you will find it infinitely relatable...hugs, Ely
I would very much like to hear what you think...I think you will find it infinitely relatable...hugs, Ely
16th Oct 2019 6:09am
One word... WOW.
The way you've imagined this brings it to life...
The way you've depicted the blind is an art....
This for me is your best ink to date...
The way you've imagined this brings it to life...
The way you've depicted the blind is an art....
This for me is your best ink to date...
16th Oct 2019 9:48am
the inner souleye n the intuitive thirdeye sees n sings all...in faith & truth of Love..mere eyeballs juz only a physicality of 'sight' .loved how you woven 'sight' 'song' see' ...reflects deeply the needful depths ...thanks Cold one, write on more the wise poetic pearls..
16th Oct 2019 10:55am
Brother, this is a fantastic expression all the way around. I love the opening stanza. Well written!
16th Oct 2019 11:19pm
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