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Re. Inarticulate
12th Oct 2019 1:17pm
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12th Oct 2019 1:28pm
not sure the rhyme scheme quite works even if the contents of my mouth pleases you
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12th Oct 2019 1:59pm
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14th Oct 2019 12:10pm
Re. Inarticulate
12th Oct 2019 4:06pm
Its feels as if it is something that would be whispered in the mind while memories are being replayed. I love it.
Very beautiful SweetO!
--B
Very beautiful SweetO!
--B
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14th Oct 2019 9:46am
Re. Inarticulate
12th Oct 2019 5:02pm
The escape from drudgery has never sounded so good. Another bulge-inducing read, Sweet O.
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12th Oct 2019 8:01pm
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14th Oct 2019 9:47am
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14th Oct 2019 9:44pm
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14th Oct 2019 10:00pm
I'm sure you're equipped; by your leave,
Let generous teachings intrigue
The mouth to be filled,
By a teacher so skilled,
A most wicked web will be weaved...
Let generous teachings intrigue
The mouth to be filled,
By a teacher so skilled,
A most wicked web will be weaved...
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14th Oct 2019 10:47pm
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14th Oct 2019 00:11am
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2019 10:25pm
I love the way you can refresh erotica every time, making it new, intriguing and almost palpable. You are always gifted. Not everyone can return so often to a theme and make it so naturally fluent, arousing but, at the same time, very chaste. Beautiful. J
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Re. Inarticulate
15th Oct 2019 7:49pm
You delight my envisioning with this sensory passion play. There is always a sadness behind your words but uplifted by the song of your sensuality.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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