Pink Syllables

Thank you. I surely need to clean up my senryu abilities,  but the idea just popped in my head & made me say, mmhmm. ;)

*big grin* 😁

lot of passion in this write
just beautiful
enjoy your day

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I send you my hugs in hopes your health is still stable...

it is
thanks for asking

Awesome, I'm glad to know you are!

Love this one!  Amplified by that lovely image.

Thanks, T. Honored it made your list. Heading your way soon. Like that avi, it's very befitting for the circumstances.;)👀

There’s nothing like a quick martini

Better than vodka, indeed;)

Echo Tenderloin's comment. Realised when I counted syllables per line it is a haiku.

Thank you Solomon.  Yeah, I need to do some brushing up skills on my technique , but it popped in a mind with writers block,  so I ran with it...

so freaking sexy beautiful Pandora
mmm delicious Haiku...

my imagination is running wild ;)

love Brenda ❤

Thank you, lovely lady. The circuit for my erotic writing has been placed on overload, my creativity is currently under construction. Lol. Glad it was likeable;) 💖

A firestorm of erotic heat with a truly clever scenario. This is the stuff dreams are made of. Hot, hot, hot! John

Thank you, John. My mind was kinda blank & a poorly executed senryu was created. Viola! 😅....glad the message made a well  enough statement to be enjoyed.

*kitty purrs back, just waiting on you to come back home to smother you in hugs*

....f'ng bullies.🤨

A brilliant and clever play of few words.  I love how you ended with plea's !!     If I was fluent enough to translate this into French...I'd be a cunning linguist.  Excuse the pun 😁   Great writing Pandy ❤

Or a cunting linguist. 😏 I'm glad you enjoyed that little word play at the end. As I've told everyone else, a poorly crafted senryu was born. I now see where I could've switched my syllables, but oh well. Thanks, buddy...

Bravisima, Pandora! I love the sensual writing metaphor. Oh to have a "well versed pen." I also love the romance of "write me a sonnet." As if the love-making is as profound and beautiful as a sonnet.

Omg, I hang my head in shame with this before the Senryu King, himself! 🙈 I'm glad the word usage spoke enough & leave it to you to recognize the emphasis I wanted to portray with " sonnet"....mmhmm..

Never, hang your head in shame. Mine tends to hide in shame 🙄😜 If this is indicative of your Senryu prowess then you are the Goddess thereof. Yes, the sonnet passage is such a beautiful plea for passionate love making...mmmhmmmm indeed! 💕🎶

Most appreciated, Danny....