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overcast skies
a familiar gray hue
lingers over my room
i hop out of bed
the weather i read
might require a sled
but i don’t care
me and fall make a great pair
overcast skies
the best time to fantasize
my want for you intensifies
i hope you think of me
when you hear the breeze
free flowing through the leaves
lingers over my room
i hop out of bed
the weather i read
might require a sled
but i don’t care
me and fall make a great pair
overcast skies
the best time to fantasize
my want for you intensifies
i hope you think of me
when you hear the breeze
free flowing through the leaves
Published 4th Oct 2019
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4th Oct 2019 11:16am
the changing of the seasons is truly a beauty to behold for there is beauty each way you turn as you see the transformation of nature in its colors of self beauty...nicely composed
4th Oct 2019 4:48pm
beautifully said! nature has such a calming presence for me and i wanted to share that.
thank you for reading :)
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thank you for reading :)
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4th Oct 2019 10:13pm
4th Oct 2019 12:50pm
A lovely snapshot of the changing season. Really enjoyed the last four lines.
4th Oct 2019 4:53pm
thank you love. the poem itself was inspired by your previous comment. always a pleasure hearing from you :) thank you for taking the time out to read.
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4th Oct 2019 6:31pm
5th Oct 2019 12:44pm
Autumn is remarkable as is this poem
As a skin cancer warrior I love overcast skies
Feeling you on this one
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As a skin cancer warrior I love overcast skies
Feeling you on this one
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5th Oct 2019 3:44pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Oct 2019 2:35am
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8th Oct 2019 4:27am
a moment in time, nicely done, romantic undertones are sweet. :)
8th Oct 2019 7:17pm
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