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[ CC ] underworlds of words uncovered
with diction dynamite; she digs
mightily carving out
a straight, n'arrow route;
opening statements initiated
with blasting CAP[ital]S detonated
sequential to maximize
their exponential potentials
perhaps consider taking cover?
never leaves anyone bored
breaking right on through
chambers hitherto unexplored
where hides the poetry lover
[in you]
for within every poem by her
there resides truth diamond hard
unearthed in this infinite mine[d]
underground; complex
of my mind vastly simplified into
a mansion of continual expansion
Written by
JohnnyBlaze
Published 3rd Oct 2019
| Edited 27th Oct 2021
Author's Note
inspired by and with Love for Ahavati 💜💑💋
inspired by the writings of e.e. cummings
for the comp "Classic Corner Champion - Male Division" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11020/
inspired by the writings of e.e. cummings
for the comp "Classic Corner Champion - Male Division" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11020/
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Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 1:33pm
Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 1:34pm
Oh wow! Thank you. 💜💑💋 I was not expecting that!
I was just noting while reading this the brilliant use of n'arrow and CAP[ital]S. ee had such a way about him and observations, particularly people. I think you've captured that perfectly here.
I was just noting while reading this the brilliant use of n'arrow and CAP[ital]S. ee had such a way about him and observations, particularly people. I think you've captured that perfectly here.
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Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 2:20pm
Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 4:22pm
"Run, and Take Cover, Kids!" (Get under your desks, fchrisakes!)
All kidding aside.........a lovely tribute to a loving poet>
All kidding aside.........a lovely tribute to a loving poet>
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Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 5:12pm
Thank you, Danny.
She is all that with a dab of nitroglycerin behind each ear.
She is all that with a dab of nitroglycerin behind each ear.
Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 8:59pm
Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 6:54pm
You, JB, have been Her Superman who can transmute coal to diamonds
Isn't this one of the duties of a muse?
nicely laid out spill
Isn't this one of the duties of a muse?
nicely laid out spill
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Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 7:16pm
I tend to make my own diamonds by squeezing coal between my atomic butt cheeks.
Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 7:18pm
Damn, Brother,
You are in a weird state today!
(caused me to laugh, though, and so i thank You)
You are in a weird state today!
(caused me to laugh, though, and so i thank You)
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Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 7:24pm
Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
3rd Oct 2019 7:28pm
100% agree
laughter born out of kindness
is often
cleansing and refreshing
i always thank people when they cause me to laugh and or smile (i truly believe it makes one younger longer)
laughter born out of kindness
is often
cleansing and refreshing
i always thank people when they cause me to laugh and or smile (i truly believe it makes one younger longer)
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Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
4th Oct 2019 2:06am
Re. underworlds of words uncovered
4th Oct 2019 3:51am
I could tell this was based on ee cummings from the hypnotic rhythm, it's just like him to hide his unassuming self in the authors notes to be (un)covered.. It's a great un-entry too..
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Re: Re. underworlds of words uncovered
4th Oct 2019 11:10am
Thank you, PR. That means a lot. I was more inspired by than man himself than any particular poem.
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4th Oct 2019 1:47pm
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