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A Cure
( a Quatern dedicated to You )
If only this will work and make us whole,
To give us peace of mind in thinking Deep.
To lift our spirits: body, mind and soul,
For all is well in dreams, and so for keeps.
This is a site that’s safe for you and me,
If only this will work and make us whole.
To reassure; create and be set free,
It’s then the time to realize your goal.
It’s best we all share food in half a bowl
Than half of us go hungry when it’s full.
If only this will work and make us whole,
To have an equal turn, an equal pull
If every member realizes this,
There’s never been a better time to grow.
So friend & foe will then make up & kiss,
If only this will work and make us whole.
If only this will work and make us whole,
To give us peace of mind in thinking Deep.
To lift our spirits: body, mind and soul,
For all is well in dreams, and so for keeps.
This is a site that’s safe for you and me,
If only this will work and make us whole.
To reassure; create and be set free,
It’s then the time to realize your goal.
It’s best we all share food in half a bowl
Than half of us go hungry when it’s full.
If only this will work and make us whole,
To have an equal turn, an equal pull
If every member realizes this,
There’s never been a better time to grow.
So friend & foe will then make up & kiss,
If only this will work and make us whole.
Published 23rd Sep 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by a plea written in the night.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Sep 2019 11:13pm
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23rd Sep 2019 11:55pm
Damnit Beautiful Sister
i've been thinking along these lines for the past several days and had something to share
but it was more of me and tears
You have spilled and summed up without me having to get all wet
thank You
Love Love the spill
i've been thinking along these lines for the past several days and had something to share
but it was more of me and tears
You have spilled and summed up without me having to get all wet
thank You
Love Love the spill
24th Sep 2019 1:06am
My dear brother T - I’m giving you a big furry hug ( tiger here ) even as I write this. I’m very honored.
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24th Sep 2019 1:00am
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24th Sep 2019 1:52am
jade, love the restraint and competence of this piece. quaterns can be harder than they look; you make the form disappear and the message echo - that's skill
24th Sep 2019 2:33am
Dear Jan, what can I say... the homestretch of your comment has me breathless with gratitude.
Thank you🐾
Thank you🐾
Anonymous
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24th Sep 2019 2:37am
Playdate, here you are! I was holding my breath.
Thank you so much for the read, and dear words!
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Thank you so much for the read, and dear words!
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If only, if only, if only cried the moon. Peace and love can come non to soon.
Well done Jade. You have a beautiful spirit.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well done Jade. You have a beautiful spirit.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Sep 2019 2:45am
I feel blessed, for how this poem came to be, and I feel your connection, dear Kitty.
It practically burst from my head almost fully formed once the inspiration glanced its blow, so strong were/are my emotions.
a century hug,
Jade🐾
It practically burst from my head almost fully formed once the inspiration glanced its blow, so strong were/are my emotions.
a century hug,
Jade🐾
24th Sep 2019 9:15am
You speak directly to my heart, well done. I will do what I can to make it work.
24th Sep 2019 11:01am
Thank you, Altair, for such supportive sentiments & support. Nice to meet you.
24th Sep 2019 8:43pm
Lovely work Jadey in your elegant style, wonderful uplifting message. <3
25th Sep 2019 3:53am
Thank you, Daniel. I wish I knew where to post it to spread its message to more of the members.
24th Sep 2019 11:08pm
Flows beautifully - reads like a dream fit and ready to come true - with a brave reconciliatory tonemessage that only the hardest of hearts would resist.
25th Sep 2019 4:07am
My gracious thanks, Josh, for your kind support. I wish I could get the message out there to more members.
26th Sep 2019 00:00am
"It’s best we all share food in half a bowl
Than half of us go hungry when it’s full"
So honest and yet true, it's like your Zen is glowing all over this piece.
Beautiful stuff.
Than half of us go hungry when it’s full"
So honest and yet true, it's like your Zen is glowing all over this piece.
Beautiful stuff.
26th Sep 2019 00:25am
Yes, yes you’ve called it perfectly. Oh gosh, thank you so much for this, Wally.
🙏🏻
🙏🏻
26th Sep 2019 3:50am
Dear J-P,
How elegant! So poignantly penned and phrased, clear message without offense.
You speak with the eloquence of the goddesses! Well done! H🌷
How elegant! So poignantly penned and phrased, clear message without offense.
You speak with the eloquence of the goddesses! Well done! H🌷
*apologies for my tardiness*
Because your collective words were/are so thoughtfully wonderful, I didn’t know how to act or what to say. I graciously thank you, dearest Honoria, from one goddess to another. x
👰🏻👰🏼
p.s. I adore your new carousel horse avatar🎠
Because your collective words were/are so thoughtfully wonderful, I didn’t know how to act or what to say. I graciously thank you, dearest Honoria, from one goddess to another. x
👰🏻👰🏼
p.s. I adore your new carousel horse avatar🎠
30th Sep 2019 3:01am
Hehe thank you so much for noticing! I’m feeling quite proud of myself for figuring out how to change it by myself. Glad you like. 😎
