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Confession
Sometimes I fantasize about being strung out
for days inside your condo.
Lying there, lucidly, in a muddled stupor.
The taffeta bed sheets stick to my skin.
In a haze, my heavy armor -
sweat drenched and discarded.
You soothe the ridges of my furrowed brow
as soft utterances of tender sweet nothings
escape from your parched lips.
“I’ll marry you, not now but when I become a man again.”
“Right now, I’m weak...”
“I’m not the man you need me to be.”
My eyes, glistening, in the dim lighting,
squint from the stench of your cigarette.
“Look at me,” you coax into my ear.
“You’re beautiful here.”
I turn my head to meet your gaze.
“I know you’re sad too.”
Your face is a woeful confession.
There is a slight intermission...
and I suspect I feel you growing against my thigh.
A mound of warm, naked flesh.
“Let’s do another hit off your ass” you say changing the subject.
I watch the corners of your mouth upturn
and feverish with the thought.
There is only my willing submissiveness
acting
as the savior and solitary solution
to our lingering respite.
Reflecting on these candid moments,
it isn’t you or the drugs I miss...
It’s the forlorn attempt at being
the closest to true love I’ll ever get...
in this lifetime.
Author's Note
Inspired by the love of a gangster.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 3:16pm
confession is good for the soul for it helps us move on for what is sometimes isn't meant to be is not an curse sometimes its a blessing in disguise, for with each encounter of hearts and minds we learn a lesson about life and thyself for through hurt and pain we gain growth of our mind heart and spiritual soul which bring maturity...NICELY WRITTEN
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19th Sep 2019 2:32pm
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19th Sep 2019 3:15pm
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2019 3:35pm
Interesting...a blunt would better illuminate without causing the shacks, tremors and ...well, interesting read as usual! Yeah, just like that!!!
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Re: Re. Confession
19th Sep 2019 2:32pm
Oh believe me..we smoked blunts too. (;
Yeah, just like that baby!
Yours,
LostGirl
Yeah, just like that baby!
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 3:39pm
This, to me, had the feel of noir, like a Bonnie and Clyde type of relationship. Your face is a woeful confession is a powerful hit to the realism inside us all - that many do wear their hearts upon their sleeves - and how others read them.
This is delicate erotica from the soul vs the body; it has love vs lust - not easily done in this environment.
Well done, LG . But, you are love. xo
This is delicate erotica from the soul vs the body; it has love vs lust - not easily done in this environment.
Well done, LG . But, you are love. xo
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19th Sep 2019 2:36pm
How very perceptive as always, Wise One.
I was definitely the Bonnie to his Clyde.
Guns out. A fast car.
A robbery or two.
The stuff of great relationships. (;
Your ride or die in the Deep,
Losty
I was definitely the Bonnie to his Clyde.
Guns out. A fast car.
A robbery or two.
The stuff of great relationships. (;
Your ride or die in the Deep,
Losty
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 3:48pm
That forlorn attempt at being. You constructed a powerful scene in this. Powerful opening. Nice ink!
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19th Sep 2019 2:39pm
Hello, my darling. (;
We all want to feel something to be reassured of our existence.
We all need to feel alive.
And sometimes, these grasps at the straws of happiness are all we have to hold on to.
Yours,
Losty
We all want to feel something to be reassured of our existence.
We all need to feel alive.
And sometimes, these grasps at the straws of happiness are all we have to hold on to.
Yours,
Losty
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 4:17pm
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19th Sep 2019 2:40pm
I’m definitely more wicked than nice.
It’s always more fun being bad. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
It’s always more fun being bad. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 4:39pm
Re: Re. Confession
19th Sep 2019 2:40pm
I did hang in there, gorgeous babydoll.
Far longer than I should have. (;
Yours,
Losty
Far longer than I should have. (;
Yours,
Losty
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 4:50pm
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19th Sep 2019 2:41pm
Gotta love me some Bruce on a lonely night.
Good company.
Thanks Jazzy one. (;
Yours,
Losty
Good company.
Thanks Jazzy one. (;
Yours,
Losty
Re: Re. Confession
19th Sep 2019 8:25pm
Indeed that album was crafted as he was as he was going through a divorce.
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19th Sep 2019 2:42pm
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18th Sep 2019 6:57pm
-'._! mothaMeffer, felt every word
especially this....:
* It’s the forlorn attempt at being
the closest to true love I’ll ever get...
in this lifetime.
especially this....:
* It’s the forlorn attempt at being
the closest to true love I’ll ever get...
in this lifetime.
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19th Sep 2019 2:45pm
Hurts like a MOTHA MEFFER, don’t it?
Thank you, lovely lady, it’s always a pleasure to see your gorgeous self amongst the commentary.
Glad you felt this one.
Your friend,
Losty
Thank you, lovely lady, it’s always a pleasure to see your gorgeous self amongst the commentary.
Glad you felt this one.
Your friend,
Losty
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 9:58pm
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19th Sep 2019 2:46pm
Darling, T!
I gave you the shivers?
Oh, how I blush. 😊
Mission accomplished.
Your girl,
Losty
I gave you the shivers?
Oh, how I blush. 😊
Mission accomplished.
Your girl,
Losty
Re. Confession
18th Sep 2019 11:30pm
There's a darkness in this ink that gets under the skin...something that we can all connect too one way or another LG.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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19th Sep 2019 2:47pm
Sexy, Harry.
You just can’t stay away from me, can you?
I really don’t mind. (;
Thank you ,bad boy, for such high praises.
Yours,
LostGirl
You just can’t stay away from me, can you?
I really don’t mind. (;
Thank you ,bad boy, for such high praises.
Yours,
LostGirl
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20th Sep 2019 4:39am
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19th Sep 2019 2:52pm
You
Get
Me..
Handsome.
And yes, it was definitely all an act. 😎
A very Oscar worthy performance, if I do say so myself.
Your Bonnie,
LostGirl
P.S. You could never be too close to me, HF. (;
Get
Me..
Handsome.
And yes, it was definitely all an act. 😎
A very Oscar worthy performance, if I do say so myself.
Your Bonnie,
LostGirl
P.S. You could never be too close to me, HF. (;
Re. Confession
19th Sep 2019 3:49pm
this is so sexy to me beautiful Lost Girl
having loved a few gangsters myself I can appreciate the deep passion
that can be stirred by such a man...
that being said you are a deeply sensual woman
who paints rich stories for me to get lost in...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
having loved a few gangsters myself I can appreciate the deep passion
that can be stirred by such a man...
that being said you are a deeply sensual woman
who paints rich stories for me to get lost in...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
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19th Sep 2019 5:55pm
Thank you Brenda!
If we are going to wander..lost in our stories..
in a sensual netherworld,
let’s do so together.. (;
Your partner in crime,
Losty
😘
If we are going to wander..lost in our stories..
in a sensual netherworld,
let’s do so together.. (;
Your partner in crime,
Losty
😘
Re. Confession
19th Sep 2019 10:18pm
There was a "Partners in Crime" comp a little earlier this year. This felt like that down time between lovers, they way she approaches him so seductively, dangerously.
It was erotic and honest. Excellent piece Ms. Lost
It was erotic and honest. Excellent piece Ms. Lost
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19th Sep 2019 10:28pm
A softer, feminine approach is my style.
"Be mine" I whisper.
It usually works. (;
Thank you Wally. Love it when you flap your wings over here to visit!
Yours,
Losty
"Be mine" I whisper.
It usually works. (;
Thank you Wally. Love it when you flap your wings over here to visit!
Yours,
Losty
Re. Confession
I could describe you in one word
It would be MADAME
Not all women know
That men are servants
Not all men know that
Women are masters
The never see through
Your eyes
It would be MADAME
Not all women know
That men are servants
Not all men know that
Women are masters
The never see through
Your eyes
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Re: Re. Confession
20th Sep 2019 10:36pm
If only men acted as my indebted servants.
It usually takes a lot more brute force. (;
Yours,
Losty
It usually takes a lot more brute force. (;
Yours,
Losty
Re: Re. Confession
21st Sep 2019 00:25am
It’s hard for you not to be the merciful being that you are
There’s god’s and goddesses in us all
There’s god’s and goddesses in us all
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21st Sep 2019 00:43am
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Ah! he said pulling her close
Her ener-G blazing with a fragrant
Note of passion and musk
Her pores admitting the sweat of an Alpha lioness
Her ener-G blazing with a fragrant
Note of passion and musk
Her pores admitting the sweat of an Alpha lioness
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23rd Sep 2019 9:13pm
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23rd Sep 2019 9:16pm
Thank you girlfriend. (:
Always grateful for the support of other talented women in the Deep.
Thanks for stopping by.
Yours,
Losty
Always grateful for the support of other talented women in the Deep.
Thanks for stopping by.
Yours,
Losty