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the serious matter of flies
what is
poisonous
for some
is poetry
for others
what is
reason for
a few is
insanity
to many
black
white
yin
yang
the clarity
of division
the rage
of duality
and flies wring
their front
legs together
before the
swatter
descends
ending the
confusion
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Re. the serious matter of flies
17th Sep 2019 11:19pm
Re: Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 1:49am
Re. the serious matter of flies
Anonymous
18th Sep 2019 1:47am
Uhhh .... wow.

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Re: Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 1:57am
Thats the coolest freakin' comment i have ever received! Thanks Johnny.
hug's
buddhakitty.
hug's
buddhakitty.
Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 8:15am
Dear BK,
The last stanza is gold! Eliminates all the grey matter out there.
Love it! H🌷
The last stanza is gold! Eliminates all the grey matter out there.
Love it! H🌷
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Re: Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 11:01am
Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 9:57am
I think the fly is just rubbing his hands in delight for a meal.
The fly swat is probably pretty confusing
The fly swat is probably pretty confusing
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Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 3:30pm
So proud when you bring those big claws out, kitty. (:
You tore right through me.
Your friend,
Losty
You tore right through me.
Your friend,
Losty
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Re: Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 11:07pm
Time to clean these claws. Thank for the good words Losty.
luv's
buddhakitty.
luv's
buddhakitty.
Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 8:44pm
Re: Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 11:09pm
So right about the swat team. Thank you for the comments.
regards,
buddhakitty.
regards,
buddhakitty.
Re. the serious matter of flies
18th Sep 2019 11:34pm
I must tell you Kitty, your art at the moment is just amazing...just love the depth and spirituality of this brilliant poem.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. the serious matter of flies
19th Sep 2019 3:01am