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the Czech woman
his angry vision assaulted my senses
I counted the minutes staring at the wall
becoming the mistress of his dreams
my virtue swallowed with the vodka
I was just his whore...then
the time passed without protest
I'd forgotten I was a Goddess
Published 16th Sep 2019
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16th Sep 2019 9:08pm
16th Sep 2019 10:08pm
alright, alright I'm repressed... I'll admit it this turned me on Czechfantasy.com pornhub... shockingly true my guilt inspired this poem ❤
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16th Sep 2019 10:24pm
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16th Sep 2019 10:26pm
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16th Sep 2019 10:28pm
17th Sep 2019 6:25am
Talking to yourself again...I do the same....I do love good conversation
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff
16th Sep 2019 10:01pm
Dear B,
Love this love this love this. You’re comment to yourself had me burst out laughing.
How much to rent your muse?
H🌷
Love this love this love this. You’re comment to yourself had me burst out laughing.
How much to rent your muse?
H🌷
16th Sep 2019 10:05pm
thank you beautiful Honoria for the love on this write it was inspired by a shocking picture I found that aroused me then later I felt guilty about it and wrote this... the martyr comment is about you know lol... I'm such a dirty girl and don't want to admit it giggles...you're beautiful to me lady 🌹
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
16th Sep 2019 11:37pm
17th Sep 2019 2:27am
Having seen the picture definitely gives me insight into the write. Nice economy in your stanzas, having encapsulated the scene well.
17th Sep 2019 2:48am
thank you dearest Daniel originally I posted the picture with the poem but I feared people found it too shocking... I'm happy the poem its self captured that scene well...I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
17th Sep 2019 3:11am
Brenda your title drew me in right away. And your naughty girl guilt was a delight to behold. Love where that picture took you and the turn on your poem gave me.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
19th Sep 2019 1:59pm
thank you graciously dearest John your comment gifted me many smiles... I'm so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
18th Sep 2019 00:56am
Lovely, lady Crim.
This write transported me to some dark, unfamiliar places..
What a trip. (;
Yours,
Losty
This write transported me to some dark, unfamiliar places..
What a trip. (;
Yours,
Losty
19th Sep 2019 2:00pm
thank you beautiful Lost Girl a dark trip indeed my mind has its twists and turns I'm still trying to understand it...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
