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Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
(i) Learning to walk again
Flexibility
Manoeuvrability
Determination
(ii) Internal Change
Individual
Individualizing
Possibility
(iii) BELIEF
Ideology
Imaginativeness
Interpretation
(iv) Wheelchair Access
Disability
Unmanageability
Discrimination
(v) Let’s Argue
Differentiate
Disagreeability
Participation
(vi) Bugs
Laboratory
Bacteriological
Classification
(vii) Still On The Shelf
Negotiation
Marriageability
Anniversary
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Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
8th Sep 2019 4:51am
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9th Sep 2019 11:04pm
Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
8th Sep 2019 9:21am
I absolutely love how carefully these words were obviously chosen to hit the right spot and meet the criteria... Yet it doesn't feel too contrived.
Wonderfully done!
Delanee.
Wonderfully done!
Delanee.
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Re: Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
9th Sep 2019 11:06pm
this was a lot of work to write these and make them connect up and make sense Thank you for appreciating that :-))))))))))))
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9th Sep 2019 11:07pm
Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
8th Sep 2019 2:28pm
I agree with Delanee's comment - it could have ended up contrived - but not in the slightest. Great ink :))
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9th Sep 2019 11:08pm
thank you josh, it was a mammoth task to make them all make sense :-)))))))))
Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
8th Sep 2019 5:38pm
Terrific distillation of meaning in the most potent use of few words. Clarity and resonance abounding.
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9th Sep 2019 11:09pm
I am so glad you saw the connections making sense
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Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
8th Sep 2019 5:52pm
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9th Sep 2019 11:19pm
I am honoured by such a pronounced exegesis
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8th Sep 2019 7:06pm
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9th Sep 2019 11:21pm
Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
9th Sep 2019 3:42pm
Nicely done, David
clever without being contrived
and a whole set... yet. hugs, Ely
clever without being contrived
and a whole set... yet. hugs, Ely
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Re. Three Word Haiku 5-7-5 (7.1)
9th Sep 2019 11:22pm