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Soirée
The sprawl of a plantation through the trees,
Along the river heading for the coast.
Where wave and river meet in symmetry,
As sandpipers go chasing after ghosts .
A schooner graceful docks beside the quay,
That fronts where other guests have just arrived
By paddle wheeler after having tea,
The women in dress silk, each style revived.
The master who owns everything they see,
Has carriages with servants for each guest.
They’re taken to the manse thru’ cherry trees;
Upstairs the seamstress finishes his vest.
For later, there will be a lively reel,
To waken up the appetite to dine.
A savant of the South will speak this eve’
About the coming war, over red wine.
For all who mingle near the family graves,
They start to sing as sunset settles low
While viewing from afar the fi’eld slaves
In carrying each sheave in spartan clothes:
“Sowing in the morning, sowing seeds of kindness,
Sowing in the noontide and the dewy eve;
Waiting for the harvest, and the time of reaping,
We shall come rejoicing, bringing in the sheaves.”
Under paper lanterns hung from the trees,
A young man in a collar and waistcoat
Takes his sketchbook to pencil carefully,
As the segregation crosses the moat.
And after the dance, dining and drinking,
The speeches and debating civilized,
That got many at the soirée thinking
And still many more yet to realize.
For hours as the news has some in prayer,
The house slaves tend & clean & rearrange.
A lone bow fiddle lulls the ones still there,
For when the cock crows, life’s forever changed.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 1st Sep 2019
Author's Note
For the letter “S”.
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Re. Soirée
1st Sep 2019 2:11pm
Not sure if this image was what you intending to invoke but it takes me back to the affluent on both sides of the American Civil War: the South trying to maintain slavery the North, some of whom didn’t necessarily believe interrogation but wanted the Union to stay intact. Both would take in watching the battle scene as if it was a sport.
The cavalier attitude of what it means to support organized violent conflict resolution sadly has been on my mind for years. While acknowledging times when war is needed I feel it use creates a uncomfortable sentiment that avoids my conviction that the failure to resolve conflicts peacefully is a failure we as a world seek to avoid.
The cavalier attitude of what it means to support organized violent conflict resolution sadly has been on my mind for years. While acknowledging times when war is needed I feel it use creates a uncomfortable sentiment that avoids my conviction that the failure to resolve conflicts peacefully is a failure we as a world seek to avoid.
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Re: Re. Soirée
Thank you, JAZZ, for stopping by for a read.
As for your comment, I’ve been down very weak from illness and I struggle in my writing though I try hard. I’ve read & reread your words and I’m not able to give you a satisfactory response because my poem takes place at a plantation soirée the day/evening before the start of the U.S. Civil War - news which has been met with fear & prayer by some, and with patriotic fervor by others.
As for your comment, I’ve been down very weak from illness and I struggle in my writing though I try hard. I’ve read & reread your words and I’m not able to give you a satisfactory response because my poem takes place at a plantation soirée the day/evening before the start of the U.S. Civil War - news which has been met with fear & prayer by some, and with patriotic fervor by others.
Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 2:05pm
Re. Soirée
1st Sep 2019 2:52pm
The aristocratic south at its best and worst. Gallant and cruel in the same breath. Great imagery here Jade.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 12:11pm
Thank you, dear Kitty, your words are appreciated.
A moment in time at one of many homes the day/evening before the start of the U.S. Civil War.
Jade🙏🏻
A moment in time at one of many homes the day/evening before the start of the U.S. Civil War.
Jade🙏🏻
Re. Soirée
1st Sep 2019 7:00pm
Ms. Jade, you have a wonderful range. I know the challenge is to use the words and yet you've taken us through a journey that feels ageless.
Excellent writing.
Excellent writing.
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Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 12:14pm
Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 00:05am
Beautiful, graceful storytelling, with rich imagery. You used the required words in an elegant, thoughtful way.
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Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 4:32pm
Thanks so very much, my dear friend, for giving me such a lovely get-well present.
Jadey 🐾
Jadey 🐾
Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 4:41pm
Will be sending you good energy Jadey. *hugs* We're preparing to shelter with nearby relatives through the hurricane. If I am not around when the next podcast comes out, I hope you enjoy my Spotlight on your amazing work.
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Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 4:49pm
Oh gosh, I didn’t know you live near where hurricanes frequent - please don’t say that - I don’t know when #5 will be up, but you’ll be with us, you will, please take care.
Jadey🙏🏻
Jadey🙏🏻
Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 4:51pm
It'll be out on the 16th sugah. Thank you, we'll get through it, just hope my home makes it through intact. Love and light to you honey.
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Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 1:18am
Lovely work, Jade. Your descriptive powers amaze me. You capture the scene so well!
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Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 5:03pm
Many thanks, my crowfly friend — and it’s good to see you! We’ll talk soon, with love to Ninja!
Jade🙏🏻
Jade🙏🏻
Re. Soiréew
Those days when mothers feared for the life of there sons. Everyone knew how bad it was, whose fault it was and what to do about it.
Takes a lot of wheat to make flower and, a lot of dough to make bread $
Nice depiction/write of that time.
Takes a lot of wheat to make flower and, a lot of dough to make bread $
Nice depiction/write of that time.
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Re: Re. Soiréew
2nd Sep 2019 6:37pm
Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 10:10am
Dear J-P,
Fantastic! Why, I felt I was right there with Scarlet and Rhett. Wonderful detail in such a succinct and southerly polite manner. Good luck in the comp.
Fabulous write! H🌷
Fantastic! Why, I felt I was right there with Scarlet and Rhett. Wonderful detail in such a succinct and southerly polite manner. Good luck in the comp.
Fabulous write! H🌷
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Re: Re. Soirée
2nd Sep 2019 6:42pm
With my thanks, dear H, sharing a literary connection you made.
ever,
Jade✍🏻
ever,
Jade✍🏻
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Re: Re. Soirée
3rd Sep 2019 8:20pm
My sincerest thanks, HF, for taking the time to come in for a read and then to share your reaction. I’m glad for such support & appreciation, Poet.
Jade✍🏻
Jade✍🏻