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A stark observation.
Miss you my dear!
You are so fun to hang out with!
Sometimes I’m concerned about you...
I really hope you’re taking care of yourself.
I know you’ve been through a lot in life...
You’re a beautiful, special person!
Do not forget that, LostGirl.
..I awake to these messages.
It feels like they do not trust me alone.
It feels like suicide watch.
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Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 7:35pm
Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 7:55pm
Lovely, T!
It felt more like an annoyance..rather than positive encouragement.
But your feedback always makes me smile. (:
Thank you, friend.
Yours,
LostGirl
It felt more like an annoyance..rather than positive encouragement.
But your feedback always makes me smile. (:
Thank you, friend.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 9:48pm
My Finacee (and Domme and High Priestess) who died in the late 1970's
used to be my Spirit Guide when i was still living in Southern California and while she wasn't being the cuddliest Guide She did come to me when i felt like i was at my lowest.
My new Guide here in the desert IMO, sucks. I don't like him -- not one itty-bitty-bit. But we are getting to a neutral point in our relationship and so i am hopeful ..........
used to be my Spirit Guide when i was still living in Southern California and while she wasn't being the cuddliest Guide She did come to me when i felt like i was at my lowest.
My new Guide here in the desert IMO, sucks. I don't like him -- not one itty-bitty-bit. But we are getting to a neutral point in our relationship and so i am hopeful ..........
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Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 8:01pm
Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 8:06pm
Do we? Lol.
Always a pleasure for you to stop by here, Irv. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
Always a pleasure for you to stop by here, Irv. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 8:36pm
beautiful Lost girl a very powerful write
I understand this because I hear them whispering she's lost it...
my freest place is here with you and the other poets
I can run naked in the halls and almost no one says anything...
I feel you...
love Brenda ❤
I understand this because I hear them whispering she's lost it...
my freest place is here with you and the other poets
I can run naked in the halls and almost no one says anything...
I feel you...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 9:39pm
Can I run beside you Brenda? (;
The DEEP is a wonderful place to be free.
Sending love you way, dear friend.
Yours,
LostGirl
The DEEP is a wonderful place to be free.
Sending love you way, dear friend.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 10:14pm
yes run here beautiful one be you and don't worry about anything you're safe here in the deep...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 8:42pm
Reestablishing ourselves is a process our innturmoil causes us to loose ourselves but to regain a connection with ourselves is a powerful moment.
I may have misunderstood but what i gatheted from the read. Amazing spiritual truth.
I may have misunderstood but what i gatheted from the read. Amazing spiritual truth.
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 9:40pm
Hit the nail on the head.
Lovely, Liam. (:
Thank you for your insightful thoughts.
Yours,
LostGirl
Lovely, Liam. (:
Thank you for your insightful thoughts.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 8:46pm
Amazing how messages of kindness can be often irritating. "You ok?". That one drives me nuts. And I never say, "no I'm moody, disappointed and overworked."
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 9:41pm
My response to "You okay?"
"Mhm."
I'd rather kill myself than have you ask me again. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
"Mhm."
I'd rather kill myself than have you ask me again. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 10:02pm
I have leaned in my 60 years of life that typically people dont know what to say so they get stuck with the cliches the were taught. It would be far healthier for people to simply say," Hey! Ring me up if you need to. If not, than fine. "
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 10:21pm
I threw my phone away.
Fuck 'em all.
Now if only I could shut off the noise in my head too.
Sending you lot's of purrr's your way, kitty. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Fuck 'em all.
Now if only I could shut off the noise in my head too.
Sending you lot's of purrr's your way, kitty. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 10:50pm
The inquiry about well being we often fear because of the tendency to become a directive on how we should live. I am of the belief that we each have at least one battle/struggle that no one else can fully understand.
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
31st Aug 2019 10:52pm
It's okay to be misunderstood.
Just leave me the fuck alone. (;
Thanks Jazzy Jazz.
Yours,
LostGirl
Just leave me the fuck alone. (;
Thanks Jazzy Jazz.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. A stark observation.
They may inadvertently be adding to your self doubt/stress/anxiety.
I never saw it this way before from the victim's perspective, i.e (you) but I can see from your poem how it's making you feel.
I never saw it this way before from the victim's perspective, i.e (you) but I can see from your poem how it's making you feel.
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
1st Sep 2019 1:13am
Their voices ain’t doing me no favours. (;
Thanks for listening, Snaggy.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for listening, Snaggy.
Yours,
LostGirl
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
1st Sep 2019 6:42pm
Too many niceties can drive us to the point of being suicidal, HF.
Or perhaps, only in my case.
I just want to be left the fuck alone.
(;
Yours,
LostGirl
Or perhaps, only in my case.
I just want to be left the fuck alone.
(;
Yours,
LostGirl
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1st Sep 2019 7:04pm
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
1st Sep 2019 7:09pm
Could be both simultaneously. (;
Thanks for the read, lovely.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for the read, lovely.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. A stark observation.
1st Sep 2019 11:31pm
My mentor in life is the great Roman Stoic Philosopher, Seneca...he guides my spirit everyday. Powerful ink my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
2nd Sep 2019 00:25am
Re. A stark observation.
Anonymous
7th Sep 2019 2:28am
Lol i wonder if its an irritation at the messages or the fact that theyre simply messages. In todays technological advancements its easy to be disengenuous with plattitudes that jave little connection to who you are and how you really are;
Face to face
or a phone conversation seems to be a better way to get an honest caring message across
Darkly relateable
Face to face
or a phone conversation seems to be a better way to get an honest caring message across
Darkly relateable
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Re: Re. A stark observation.
16th Sep 2019 5:31am
Thank you, Commentonly, for your incredible insights here!
Face to face seems much more intimate and personable.
I agree wholeheartedly.
Glad these insensitive texts not only piss me off but others too.
Yours,
Losty
Face to face seems much more intimate and personable.
I agree wholeheartedly.
Glad these insensitive texts not only piss me off but others too.
Yours,
Losty
Re. A stark observation.
27th Sep 2019 2:54am
True self worth comes from within, may be sometimes folks try to raise your self esteem when you already got it. IDK, a stark observation indeed.
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