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Whispers
Tears on the floor
When you walk out the door
living nightmare
don't wanna live no more
The skies turned black
endless rain, endless pain
Looking out my windowpane
Wiping my tears
Whispers on my ears
She's already gone
You have to move on.
When you walk out the door
living nightmare
don't wanna live no more
The skies turned black
endless rain, endless pain
Looking out my windowpane
Wiping my tears
Whispers on my ears
She's already gone
You have to move on.
Published 28th Aug 2019
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10th Nov 2019 10:53am
Concise. I am of two minds: the piece feels complete on a level as it is, but at the same time I feel if expanded we can see a bit more than the little glimmer you are teasing us with here. Thank you.
26th Dec 2019 4:36am
Man, I feel for you. Losing someone you love is no joke... Best wishes to you. Great writing!
