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Aquaplane
Full of momentum
Intoxicated on summer's sunshine
No respect for the rain
I need to stop suddenly
Can't do it gently
Slam on the brakes
And drift eloquently
In slow motion...
I aquaplane
Danger in beauty
Beauty in wisdom
Bones fracture brilliantly
Like light in prisms
No room for logic
Slow motion gliding
Common sense hiding...
Cataclysm
Palace of wisdom?
If I live, leave me bleeding
Sucking moist air
With blood, hair and glass
Wrapped around my face
Whiplash with no headrest
Leave me crippled
And crumpled...
Another rusted ruin
At the side of the road to excess...
Intoxicated on summer's sunshine
No respect for the rain
I need to stop suddenly
Can't do it gently
Slam on the brakes
And drift eloquently
In slow motion...
I aquaplane
Danger in beauty
Beauty in wisdom
Bones fracture brilliantly
Like light in prisms
No room for logic
Slow motion gliding
Common sense hiding...
Cataclysm
Palace of wisdom?
If I live, leave me bleeding
Sucking moist air
With blood, hair and glass
Wrapped around my face
Whiplash with no headrest
Leave me crippled
And crumpled...
Another rusted ruin
At the side of the road to excess...
Published 22nd Aug 2019
Author's Note
The endings lines are influenced by William Blake. "The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom"
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22nd Aug 2019 12:30pm
22nd Aug 2019 8:47pm
This write has a raw message, delivered with terrific verbiage, married to this adroit syllabic flow, that is wonderful to behold. Triple threat! Great write. Glad the random poem selector brought me here.
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Daniel
If you'd like some positive and helpful feedback, join us in the group, Cafe Critique.
If you'd like to read this as an audio poem for the site podcast, The Poetcast Project, please send to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Could stimulate some new friendships amongst our listeners.
In kindness,
Daniel
13th Oct 2019 11:04am
Thank you so much Daniel. Apologies for the very late reply. I will be sure to check the group out and I'll submit the poem to the website.
I really appreciate the feedback - Syd
I really appreciate the feedback - Syd
25th Feb 2024 6:31pm
