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First Looks
First looks set the tone
the pace, the spirit, begging to roam
the views spectacular and warm
and that's just the beginning
before thoughts start to swarm
a delicate pace of distinction
where water drips, a different plane
traversing the ebbs, the flows
what we crave, what we know
light lifts eyes lost in slits of retreat
awe awakens, waiting with care
wanton whispers willed to take
slow sips of beauty, yields to make
exhilaration emulates the day
eruption, a much needed sun
embracing more than another
set forth, coming together as one
the pace, the spirit, begging to roam
the views spectacular and warm
and that's just the beginning
before thoughts start to swarm
a delicate pace of distinction
where water drips, a different plane
traversing the ebbs, the flows
what we crave, what we know
light lifts eyes lost in slits of retreat
awe awakens, waiting with care
wanton whispers willed to take
slow sips of beauty, yields to make
exhilaration emulates the day
eruption, a much needed sun
embracing more than another
set forth, coming together as one
Published 13th Aug 2019
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2019 5:16pm
I love the way you connect nature & sensuality...and the layers you invariably sneak in... Another beauty here
13th Aug 2019 10:53pm
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13th Aug 2019 10:54pm
13th Aug 2019 6:56pm
" light lifts eyes lost in slits of retreat " <<<<<-----------Wow! What a line (of thought)!!!
i think the flow here is one with the elements and sensuality and the lust
wonderful spill, Brother
i think the flow here is one with the elements and sensuality and the lust
wonderful spill, Brother
13th Aug 2019 10:54pm
