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SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
Ask, what's on my mind?
answer, what's not on my mind?
stupefied poet
answer, what's not on my mind?
stupefied poet
Author's Note
Often my mind is too unsettled, or too despondent, or too angry, or too manic to write. My safe haven is erotica because my passion for the subject is never ceasing and is common ground for the many. I am guilty of shying away from tough subjects because they are either too painful or too incendiary.
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Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
Anonymous
6th Aug 2019 8:05pm
Sigh, if we could just slow down the thought train long enough to capture a few...but nah, it seems to just barrel down the tracks...until we're derailed. I get this one...
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6th Aug 2019 8:20pm
So true! I am considering a meditation regimen that's often been recommended. I guess an unsettled mind is included in the poet job requirements.
Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
6th Aug 2019 8:19pm
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6th Aug 2019 10:46pm
Thank you, Ahavati. For some unknown reason...maybe past lives, erotica seems to flow from me...I am certainly no Don Juan :)
Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
7th Aug 2019 4:41am
I also suffer from squirrels up in the brain tree. But mostly from an over-busy life that doesn't leave enough time to tame them. Given enough space to breathe slowly, I can sometimes make them do tricks called poetry.
Tough subjects are.... tough. I bet if you just nibble away at them, 17 syllables at a time, it'll get easier.
Tough subjects are.... tough. I bet if you just nibble away at them, 17 syllables at a time, it'll get easier.
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7th Aug 2019 5:51am
But are your squirrels foaming at the mouth like mine 😁 17 syllables is my maximum for commentary on the current state of political chaos frankly he at the top and his psychophants, I mean sycophants 🙄, don't deserve more of my most prized commodity, words. Any more syllables and he'd levy a tariff on them. 🤓
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2019 12:22pm
There's no rule that says tough subjects or certain topics are required writing.
If there were, few would be bothering with them.
What we could use less of is shoddy erotica, so you are much welcomed in that department.
If there were, few would be bothering with them.
What we could use less of is shoddy erotica, so you are much welcomed in that department.
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7th Aug 2019 5:09pm
Thank you, Johnny! It may seem a bit schmaltzy but I always try to maintain a degree of reverence when writing erotica. I try to accentuate the beauty of intimacy. In my estimation well written erotica should be akin to a nature piece.
I truly appreciate your kind words of encouragement.
I truly appreciate your kind words of encouragement.
Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
12th Aug 2019 2:00am
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12th Aug 2019 2:52am
Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
12th Aug 2019 9:20pm
"I am guilty of shying away from tough subjects because they are either too painful or too incendiary."
... I think Alan Ginsberg would have said '... when you're ready, brother, when you're ready ...' :))
... I think Alan Ginsberg would have said '... when you're ready, brother, when you're ready ...' :))
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12th Aug 2019 9:43pm
Great quote, Josh! I do get in an occasional 17 syllable jab, especially at our current buffoon in chief.
Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
27th Aug 2019 2:43am
Ask a writer what is on the mind and you may get a surprise, especially if that artist enjoys many genres of creativity.
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Re. SENRYU - OVERWHELMED
1st Sep 2019 3:49am
Bless you! I feel your pain, I do. I've been having my struggles too, hopefully we'll both be on a road to more successful writes soon. I'm trying to declutter my life, but I've never been a mad writer either, it all cums slowly! 😅
Idk if I'm one of those "shoddy" erotica writers mentioned, but I do know we could use some help.👀 Cum on over!
Idk if I'm one of those "shoddy" erotica writers mentioned, but I do know we could use some help.👀 Cum on over!
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