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Attempts at Freedom
Attempts at freedom
Fleeing in time
Tears of pain
Rolling, gushing
Creasing my skin
From a 1000 years
Of flowing waters
Of attempts at freedom
To be where
I am
Fleeing in time
Tears of pain
Rolling, gushing
Creasing my skin
From a 1000 years
Of flowing waters
Of attempts at freedom
To be where
I am
Published 2nd Aug 2019
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2nd Aug 2019 6:13pm
24th Aug 2019 6:44pm
Yes you are right. Less is better, more of a minimalist type approach. Thank you for your comment.
2nd Aug 2019 9:10pm
24th Aug 2019 6:45pm
