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HAIKU - SIMPLICITY
innate is true love
hatred never rational
be by Nature bound
hatred never rational
be by Nature bound
Published 27th Jul 2019
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My truth.
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27th Jul 2019 8:47pm
27th Jul 2019 8:56pm
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27th Jul 2019 8:56pm
27th Jul 2019 9:49pm
Excellent content, Gahddess!
In the spirit of honest critique - I would refuse to cap hatred - I don't think it deserves it. Although Be does, imho. Typically there is no capitalization in traditional haiku; however, western seems to have embraced it.
In the spirit of honest critique - I would refuse to cap hatred - I don't think it deserves it. Although Be does, imho. Typically there is no capitalization in traditional haiku; however, western seems to have embraced it.
27th Jul 2019 10:05pm
28th Jul 2019 2:07am
28th Jul 2019 3:17am
Wow! Thank you, Velvet,. Would that love would reign now but I guess we can start by making our own ripples.
Anonymous
30th Jul 2019 2:38pm
My truth as well
30th Jul 2019 3:54pm
I am glad we are kindred in this respect, I knew this already about you from your loving vibe. 🙏🤓
31st Jul 2019 3:30pm
thank you for the comp entry dear Poet & shining simplistic yet the utmost truth ..of love .in such amazing haiku brevity! Best for the comp :)
1st Aug 2019 00:02am
Thank you Uma! I am touched and encouraged by your kind words. We place too may conditions and expectations on love. If, instead, we loved as a little child without judgement or selfishness our world would be heaven.
