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sacred
caught up in the melody
it awakens and invigorates
swimming on the winds
I feel the spirit of a place
I taste it with my soul
with the power to elevate or bring low
each city has its own flavor
the redwoods send out a rhythm
the oceans another feeling
on the mountain tops, I am cautious
this place is sacred
I won't even smoke here
to do so would desecrate
I wonder do others feel the energy of a place
connected to its emotions
yes, the buildings and nature have feelings
they quietly whisper
making their thoughts known
are you listening?
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Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:06pm
BEAUTIFULLY PENNED NO WORDS NEED TO BE SAID OR SPOKEN FOR THE BEAUTY YOU SPEAK UPON IS TRULY NATURES PHENOMENAL AND SACRED GROUNDS
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Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:15pm
thank you graciously dearest poet this is something I've always thought all people felt thiis until recently I was talking about it and found out it wasn't the case...
I'm so happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
I'm so happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:24pm
THERE ARE MORE WHO DO THEN YOU THINK FOR IN THE REAMS OF THE UNIVERSE THEY ARE GIVEN THE TITLE OF THE CHOSEN FEW
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Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:31pm
Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:32pm
Redwoods are so powerful - and I like the way the poem captures that. 20+ years ago I visited Sequoia National Park and brought home a piece of fallen branch which I still use as a 'talking stick'; I value it much.
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Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:34pm
thank you dearest Josh for sharing your own sacred connection with the redwoods the spirits of the place certainly let themselves be known,..
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 6:48pm
I blind I gnow hear you, I deaf I gnow see you.
That's how it goes though no?
That's how it goes though no?
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Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 7:11pm
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Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 7:10pm
thank you dearest poet most graciously I am Californian born and bred...I'm so happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. sacred
Anonymous
21st Jul 2019 9:13pm
Gorgeous
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Re: Re. sacred
21st Jul 2019 10:15pm
thank you graciously dearest Ragnar for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sacred
26th Jul 2019 5:38pm
The beauty surrounding us, does indeed speak. I can't say that of the buildings unless it's a nostalgic site with so much history. But all of nature speaks, but few listen. I'm ever grateful to see she's bringing you joy as of lately in your writing. Big hugs...always wishing you bright days! ❤🌼
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Re. sacred
26th Jul 2019 6:36pm
Dear B,
“I wonder do others feel the energy of a place
connected to its emotions
yes, the buildings and nature have feelings
they quietly whisper
making their thoughts known
are you listening? “
Yes! I truly believe places and nature have feelings. They suck in my hurt and wrap me up in a warm blanket on my worst days.
The solace from these experiences get me through another day.
Love this write! Thank you.
H 💐
“I wonder do others feel the energy of a place
connected to its emotions
yes, the buildings and nature have feelings
they quietly whisper
making their thoughts known
are you listening? “
Yes! I truly believe places and nature have feelings. They suck in my hurt and wrap me up in a warm blanket on my worst days.
The solace from these experiences get me through another day.
Love this write! Thank you.
H 💐
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