Home ?

'Home' is such an evocative word - and seems to highlight both good and bad bits into sharper relief - which I find the poem neatly captures. Nicely done.

Thank you so much Josh for your thoughtful comments  ... always appreciated  

Couldn't say it better than Josh, almost echoes what I had in mind. Terrific economy in this write, it's single scene, drawing a clear picture.

Thank you so much Daniel for your thoughtful comments  .. greatly appreciated

There's no place like home, JeJe.

Follow your heart, girl. <3

Thank you so much Ahavati for your thoughtful comments  ... I haven't felt home for a long time  .. which I guess means my journey isn't finished yet ♡

i agree with Josh & Daniel...'home' hits all the yearned & positivities...& most importantly the lifeline & beyond..the love.  

the inner dialoguing resonates right from the question mark in title & links well in these brackets...as if tending towards the search the final eternity of a solace.  

well done in expression & yes, not just the path but also the purpose & destination shines through ..

write on jeje..  light & love x:)

Thank you so much uma for your thoughtful comments  ... greatly appreciated dear one x of

Such a transient term...home...could apply to a person or a place...or simply a concept. Beautiful imagery here...going home

Thank you so much Willow for your beautiful comments...always appreciated x