His 1,000 Suns

I love the fusion that happens at the end!

Thank you, Kumar! I got that phrase stuck in my head & just had to write around it...

awesome job captures the world in hope to flee the darkness

Thank you for the honor of the add..glad you could enjoy it!

so passionately beautiful lovely one
sigh you have that special touch...

love you lady...

love Brenda 🌹

Thank you for the big smile & love you always send me, Brenda.💕

This is a little bit of everything, love and naughty dominating, erotic should had been added to themes. This is erotic as heck, just saying it without saying it

I'm glad you enjoyed it & saw it fit that way. I try not to add too many tags when I write prose so people see that &  know not to expect poetry when they open it. ;) Some people get annoyed, but I shouldn't really care should I?🤔

You shouldn't and the theme fits

Wow this so beautifully expressed! Fucking A, Pandy, I love it.

Thank you, Miss Liv, I appreciate it!

I love the new avi, you're so beautiful...🌹

Beautifully written... I love how you put this together Pandora... a epic special connection

Thank you, Magic, once again for showing your support! I truly did love going back to your write & reading you again...it's like breathing fresh air!

Brava, Pandora! This would mark the first time in history a grizzled, scurvy dog, on bended knee, begs "PLEASE Cap'in may I walk the plank?" 😁 Oh forgot the "ARGH!"  
This piece is thrillingly romantic 💕...gotta add it to the RL. I did some math, a feat of dating for me, I have seen 20,608 sunrises in my lifetime not factoring in leap years...that's genius level crap. 🙄🙃

I'm so grateful for you! You made me laugh so hard @ your genius level crap. I need a mentor for math, so now I know where to cum...I mean come. All aboard.😏
I'm so stoked that you enjoyed it & honored me with room on your RL!!  Thank you bunches....

Oh that first spelling did me some good...punched my ticket it did.  

Hey you, I'm always open to yours or anyone's suggestions, as I'm here to learn as well!;) I didn't completely understand regarding the hovering part, you mean to drop the  part "after hovering" all together & place it in the line above ? Walking the plank idea dropped & rephrased? I do wish to understand, I'm ok with f'ng up some rules in poetry,  but  with "writing" , I prefer to better myself any way I can . Thank you HF, for the kind words & suggestions. I appreciate you!!

OH OK, I totally get it now. You're Absolutely right.  I need to think my lines out better vs trying to make the layout look even...thanks for that thought I'll now remember!;)

MR, I could hug you for being so super sweet! Thank you for the kindness & support I don't feel worthy of. I truly appreciate it coming from you...I'm honored that you made room for me on your RL!!

i realize You spilled this as an erotic write
(and an incredible awesome spill)

but while i was reading i was thinking this is how i might be during a rebirth / reincarnation!

I read it over again several times, and I do see that! Good catch....your mind works in a whole other capacity for catching depth like that. I'm glad you brought it to my attention.

I'm also thankful for your kind words & the space on your RL. I'm humbled & really appreciate it!!

Thank you, my wordy woman!!😁

Such a smooth flow to this cosmic merging.  Illustrates a lovely comfort.  

Thank you, my pal...I was afraid of it being a little too metaphorical. If you approve, I'm stoked since your the king of flow these days. ;) I'm grateful for that add too!

Lovely write ... Passionate and romantic ... Bless and love ... .

I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear one. I miss your presence btw, even though my record hasn't been steady either...hugs!

Sigh...

That's one word that says enough!;)

Thank you for such a lovely compliment! Sure, you're a critic as long as you belong to this family! Which speaking of, I haven't seen you before, so welcome to the Deep if you just found us!  

Good timing! ;-)

Ikr?!😁

Another beautiful write my dear poetess ...

Thank you & especially so, for the honor of your add!🌹

Brilliant Writing. Next Time Try 1,001 Sins. Or 2,000 Sins To Out Do Your Self. Always Reach For The Stars.

I greatly appreciate it! Excuse my absence for not making it to your work yet...I'm sorry!

When you do get time Please let me know what you think as this is my first try and experience in posting very personal thoughts and experiences. Thanks.

This poetry in word motion. The end is the most brilliant climax metaphor I've read carried out.  You really have made your mark on this site and on this reader.

John

What can I say to yet another compliment that's a godsend,  than your appreciation makes my heart happy! I'm honored to have made that impression. Thank you ever much!

Wow Pandy!! A passionate and sensual write. I was in celestial bliss reading this.love It!!

Thank you. I'm so grateful for your appreciation & the generous add. Plus you got to read something not already read yet!😁