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Domestic - For the small but perfectly formed Comp
Glasgow is all guns, knives
Lots of battered wives
Friday night the rain will flood
Washing away streets of blood
Lots of battered wives
Friday night the rain will flood
Washing away streets of blood
Published 18th Jul 2019
| Edited 21st Jul 2019
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18th Jul 2019 5:21am
This is a lot of imagery packed in a small poem. I really dig this piece, David!
18th Jul 2019 2:57pm
thank you so much, it's quite hard to say something in 20 words
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18th Jul 2019 11:16pm
21st Jul 2019 9:13am
thank you, my friend, I find participation in the "Word Play Group" hones and inspires these skils. Still have lots to learn but this group has improved me as a writer :-))))))))))
Anonymous
19th Jul 2019 3:13pm
Whoa...fabulous job of painting a vivid picture with so few words! I still wanna visit someday...if I'm not a wife I'm safe, yeah? :-)
Pouncing hugs!!! :-))
Pouncing hugs!!! :-))
21st Jul 2019 9:16am
If you visit here I will be your head of security, your bodyguard, would gladly take a bullet for you :-)))))))))
Much love and Hugs <3 :-)
Much love and Hugs <3 :-)
