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Survival
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 18th Jul 2019
Author's Note
For Admin's #determination comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10876/
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Re. Survival
18th Jul 2019 1:08am
I think the multitudes need to read this and be reminded that survival is a circle that closes in on itself in order to be complete. Good write Ahvanti.
blessed be,
buddhakitty.
blessed be,
buddhakitty.
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21st Jul 2019 11:14am
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2019 1:48am
Wow.
A message short on words, yet heavy on potency.
Life is an impermanent expression; you have to make do with the circumstances you are born into and in the time you are allowed, find a way to become more than you are.
Giving back despite hardships is growth as opposed to using others or sucking your environment dry of available resources to get ahead in the world.
You captured it marvelously. 📝❤
A message short on words, yet heavy on potency.
Life is an impermanent expression; you have to make do with the circumstances you are born into and in the time you are allowed, find a way to become more than you are.
Giving back despite hardships is growth as opposed to using others or sucking your environment dry of available resources to get ahead in the world.
You captured it marvelously. 📝❤
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Re: Re. Survival
21st Jul 2019 11:18am
Some of the greatest people in the world have suffered unimaginable hardships and blame no one for their experiences. This is the difference in spiritual evolution and anchored in flesh.
Giving and Gratitude are imperative for such an evolution to take place. Thank you for seeing that, as well as your continued love and support. 📝❤
Giving and Gratitude are imperative for such an evolution to take place. Thank you for seeing that, as well as your continued love and support. 📝❤
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Re: Re. Survival
21st Jul 2019 11:19am
Sounds like you have a wise woman in your life, HF. I learned at a young age to never say never too! Funny that!
Thank you always for your support. It's truly appreciated.
Thank you always for your support. It's truly appreciated.
Re. Survival
18th Jul 2019 5:45am
the ceaseless struggle is the essence of survival & not being the robust fittest as the evolutionary law might say..poetic & full of elevating eternity I perceive in the verses ..from the the non-permenance of lfeforms.. yet its its larger purpose of giving ...amazingly presented in your wise verses dear..best fr the comp.!
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Re: Re. Survival
21st Jul 2019 11:20am
Thank you, as always Uma, for interpreting the essence of the piece. Your responses are as treasured as your poetic offerings. 📝❤
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18th Jul 2019 8:05am
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21st Jul 2019 11:21am
Thank you, Jen. That's quite an honor to hear. Happy to see you back around too!
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21st Jul 2019 11:21am
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Re. Survival
18th Jul 2019 3:18pm
This is great - a much needed re-interpretation of "survival of the fittest" with several thoughts and observations to chew on. Love the photo and composition.
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Re: Re. Survival
21st Jul 2019 11:24am
Thank you, Josh. You've read Darwin's 'On the Origin of Species'? I garnered that part from Spencer's interpretation of it combined with my own. Funny how life is like veins, in that they expand multiple ways from the same artery.
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19th Jul 2019 5:19pm
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Re. Survival
21st Jul 2019 6:45pm
Adding this to my Reading List is as close to being able to adorning one of my walls with its beautiful vision, and write that speaks deeply to me. x
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Re: Re. Survival
21st Jul 2019 6:54pm
Kathy I would be honored to send you a gallery-wrapped canvas print if you would like.
Thank you for the honor.
Thank you for the honor.
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26th Jul 2019 12:59pm
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