Five Folivoras

Might be mundane thoughts/events but solidly put together

always appreciate Your read and share
thank You, Brother

Might be mundane thoughts/events but solidly put together

The moments may be mundane, but your portrait of them is anything but.  Excellent read.

i actually think this way on a daily basis
and i tried to make it as boring as possible
but maybe my choice of wording?

anyways, thank You for the kind praise and comments

It’s definitely the wording.  I think a poet’s soul creates poetry in the mind constantly, before we ever consider capturing some of it to put to paper.  So even the mundane is not at all mundane.  I felt your boredom and your apathy at the everyday events you wrote about.  It evokes emotion, and isn’t that what all good art does?

I HAD TO DO THE TITLES
because Josh told me once,
he has a dictionary next to the screen when he
gets ready to read my ink -- lol

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Yep, you got me reaching for the dictionary again {but just checking, just checking}   :))
And good luck in the comp.

Love these, Tallen!  Every day moments penned perfectly!

i am a creature of habit, i suppose

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It always comes back to trying to get a few winks...one way or another... excellent brother

napping daily is almost liken to grazing in lieu of 3 square meals a day..........

thank You for the kind praise, Brother

When you can take ordinary moments in the day & write them this beautifully, it's an amazing thing. I related to much of this...

Wonderful that You could relate
appreciate the kind share
thank You, Sister

You and Josh --  LOL

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thank You

This "existential suite" is complete in its perfection of the beginning, the middle, and the end, and the two intervals between them!
You know, Tallen, I was thinking of working up something for Josh's competition, but your eloquence intimidates me.  Moreover, I think you deserve to win.  I daresay, you have expertly constructed sophistication from the mundane, and each episode so aptly appointed!

Congratulations.

Sincerely

cab

Holy Cow!
What an incredible comment of praise and share!

I spilled i typical 24 hrs in actions and thoughts

thank You so much for the Wowing comments
and high praise