Spoons

Did you mean spooning rates “as”
rather than a?
It’s a very nice and direct declaration of love and security ... I love this Ely xo
Write on mama!
Zazzles xo

Ah...you noticed, MsZ...!

Actually.. .I had written it, ''as'' originally...
but found nonetheless that I wanted to see...  
if I could write it more literally...

So I changed,''as'' to read, ''a'' and I could now give
him, a prize... number one ...on a very big Tee...

Being out in the sticks here where nothing much happens and new hip stuff will arrive in a decade or two, I had to do a little research on the meaning of 'spooning' - and realised we are already competent in this matter {  :)) } ... all of which adds to the enjoyment of your poem.

Oh my goodness...
what a glorious giggle I got
from that little snippet of edification... hugs, Ely

Great word play with wonderful sentiment, anyone reading this will know that feeling of 'we' like no other.

Thank you Layla, for you comment and the visit...both are much appreciated... Ely

One of the most intimate moments...spooning. The physical contact is one thing...then there's the quiet conversation that sometimes accompanies it. Love spooning. And I love this poem.

(Got a giggle over Josh's comment too...)   :-)

Many thanks, MsWillow...
your opinion is highly valued

...and I do agree...
spooning has a high degree...
of quiet intimacy... Ely

Yes, I (a)gree, much to be said of those times, even 2 to 5 decades later.

Nicely done, Ely

How time flies when we're having fun... there is nothing like a snuggle... hugs... Ely