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Bountiful Land
Beyond borders of average intent
beyond curves of standard limits
lies a bountiful country
with deep running rivers
and mountains few will climb.
Gentle slopes of sound-scaped wisdom
roll down soft mossy ground
encouraging determined walking
as swaying trees shape shadows into sharper relief.
Boulder-rocks dotted across the terrain call for examination
each one chiselled with specific messages for extra learning.
Ripples reflect questions over cool lakes
carried breezily in varied languages of the soul.
Spend time in this country
the land of Ahavati
and when reluctantly returning to your own event
you will take gifts gathered in one of the world’s special oases:
a lightened step
a poet’s smile
a sense of spacious moments, well spent.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Ahavati/
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 12th Jun 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Comp entry for "Doppelgänger: the DUP Oscars", hosted by highlyfunctional.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Ahavati/
Ahavati - Tyrant of Words, Empress of NaPoWriMo, dula to fledgling poets - what more can I say?
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Ahavati/
Ahavati - Tyrant of Words, Empress of NaPoWriMo, dula to fledgling poets - what more can I say?
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
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Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 1:18pm
Gosh, I am humbled, Josh. To say the least. The imagery is impeccable and nature is definitely my holy ground.
Thank you so much.
Thank you so much.
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12th Jun 2019 1:29pm
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12th Jun 2019 1:31pm
I wanted to say more, but I felt prideful because it was about me. I'll separate myself from it at some point when my emotion has quelled. It truly is an honor to be the recipient of this.
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Re. Bountiful Land
Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 1:28pm
Just keep your hands off Ahavati's mountains. 😉
A fine tribute as if there ever was, Josh. Yes, comparing her to Nature is a wonderful compliment.
A fine tribute as if there ever was, Josh. Yes, comparing her to Nature is a wonderful compliment.

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Re. Bountiful Land
Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 1:50pm
Man, this is gorgeous. The landscape, the words, the intent...beautiful

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Re: Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 1:55pm
Thank you Willow - a double inspiration from both Nature and Ahavati pushed my pen in no uncertain terms.
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13th Jun 2019 7:16pm
Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 2:03pm
Absolutely wonderful tribute to an equally wonderful poetess.. The best compliment that can be given.
I adored this, Josh!
Delanee.
I adored this, Josh!
Delanee.
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Re: Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 3:10pm
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12th Jun 2019 7:15pm
Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 4:42pm
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12th Jun 2019 8:55pm
Ah AB, you stretch my understanding into unknown territories. I know virtually zilch about Ezra Pound's Cantos (if that the right reference) so I'm struggling somewhat to get to the essence of your comment ... Any help gratefully received :))
Re: Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 9:10pm
Hi Josh
Basil Bunting wrote a poem about Ezra Pound's Cantos https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/on-the-fly-leaf-of-pound-s-cantos/
I put you in the role of Bunting and Ahavati in the role of Pound. Both in a positive way I hasten to add.
Basil Bunting wrote a poem about Ezra Pound's Cantos https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/on-the-fly-leaf-of-pound-s-cantos/
I put you in the role of Bunting and Ahavati in the role of Pound. Both in a positive way I hasten to add.
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12th Jun 2019 9:22pm
Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 8:30pm
Well spent, indeed... also inspired... with eloquence endowed...upon a humble poet who...stands out from the crowd... I can almost see the painting of the place you have described...the drawing's on the canvas... we'll see what comes to pass.
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Re: Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 8:47pm
Thank you Ely. Have I got it right that you are also a painter? If so, when the painting's done - why not post it with a poem? (or a collab poem?)
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13th Jun 2019 10:34pm
I don't much anymore...small found object sculptures at the moment.
But the idea is intriguing...leave me think on it...Ely
But the idea is intriguing...leave me think on it...Ely
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14th Jun 2019 9:07am
You've given me an idea. I do 'zome' sculptures (occasionally) and put them on my quinta - I'll try and think of a poem about them and post a pic with it.
Re. Bountiful Land
12th Jun 2019 9:33pm
A fine tribute to Ahavati, and the bounty of nature. We have so much to learn from the land. Beautiful and moving write!
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Thank you Crow. 'Nature reveals her secrets to those who spend time with her'. (A day later...) just noticed the RL; thank you so much.
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13th Jun 2019 7:17pm
Re. Bountiful Land
13th Jun 2019 00:00am
A tribute extraordinaire Josh...here's to our Poetess Queen A.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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13th Jun 2019 11:14am
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13th Jun 2019 11:18am
Thank you Wally, honoured by the another generous RL. Glad you could 'drink in' from it.