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Love Actually Love
There is a difference
Between knowing you’re loved
And personally feeling loved
And in reality, being loved
Love is a touch
It’s a hand squeeze
It’s a shoulder rubbing
It’s a gentle lifting of your chin
A drying of your eyes
A mopping of your brow
It’s a hug from behind
Unexpected hands round shoulders
Love is a look
You can see it in their eyes
No need to wash the windows
That gentle smile, sometimes
That beaming smile of happiness
Just directed towards you
Love is eye to eye contact
With eyes that smile
Love is a hug
A long and warm hug
Teddy Bear hugs are best
It’s a cuddle
It’s a snuggle
Love is an embrace
Unencumbered by sexual thoughts
love doesn’t equal Lust
Love is a word
Love is a whisper
It’s all about the crack
It’s about conversation
It’s about joking and laughing
Enjoying each others company
Conversing can be serious
But needs the occasional nob gag
Love is not just a feeling
Love is a knowing
Loving is proactive
Never taken for granted
It Cares
It supports
It forgives
Encouraging positive outcomes
Love is a vital fuel
That runs the engine
Motivates avoiding inertia
Running out of fuel can be fatal
A daily top-up is necessary
Without its fuel
Your vehicle becomes
Like a clown car
Bits forever falling off
Until it seizes
Running on vapours
Like working from memories
Is lonely and never good
Love is a tandem
Love requires a pillion passenger
Love is not a dish for one
We all need somebody to love
For those who don’t have anyone
Love becomes dark
It becomes the dark destroyer
Laying waste to its victims
Love is necessary for life itself
Death falls heavily on the unloved
Between knowing you’re loved
And personally feeling loved
And in reality, being loved
Love is a touch
It’s a hand squeeze
It’s a shoulder rubbing
It’s a gentle lifting of your chin
A drying of your eyes
A mopping of your brow
It’s a hug from behind
Unexpected hands round shoulders
Love is a look
You can see it in their eyes
No need to wash the windows
That gentle smile, sometimes
That beaming smile of happiness
Just directed towards you
Love is eye to eye contact
With eyes that smile
Love is a hug
A long and warm hug
Teddy Bear hugs are best
It’s a cuddle
It’s a snuggle
Love is an embrace
Unencumbered by sexual thoughts
love doesn’t equal Lust
Love is a word
Love is a whisper
It’s all about the crack
It’s about conversation
It’s about joking and laughing
Enjoying each others company
Conversing can be serious
But needs the occasional nob gag
Love is not just a feeling
Love is a knowing
Loving is proactive
Never taken for granted
It Cares
It supports
It forgives
Encouraging positive outcomes
Love is a vital fuel
That runs the engine
Motivates avoiding inertia
Running out of fuel can be fatal
A daily top-up is necessary
Without its fuel
Your vehicle becomes
Like a clown car
Bits forever falling off
Until it seizes
Running on vapours
Like working from memories
Is lonely and never good
Love is a tandem
Love requires a pillion passenger
Love is not a dish for one
We all need somebody to love
For those who don’t have anyone
Love becomes dark
It becomes the dark destroyer
Laying waste to its victims
Love is necessary for life itself
Death falls heavily on the unloved
Written by
David_Macleod
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Published 9th Jun 2019
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Re. Love Actually Love
9th Jun 2019 2:02pm
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21st Jun 2019 2:48am
Re. Love Actually Love
9th Jun 2019 2:30pm
Really connected with this, David - and with uplifting imagery and phrases, bringing clarity to a much confused (and sometimes abused) subject. Powerful write.
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21st Jun 2019 2:50am
thank you, my friend, coming from such an accomplished poet as yourself I am honoured :-)))))))))
Re. Love Actually Love
9th Jun 2019 2:42pm
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21st Jun 2019 2:50am
Re. Love Actually Love
9th Jun 2019 5:58pm
A beautiful spill, Davey. You captured the essence of love! I'm sending teddy bear hugs from my part of the world & taking this with me!! Xx
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21st Jun 2019 2:52am
why thank you, Panda for the comment, the visit and the teddy bear hugs, they were the best :-))))))))))
(((((((((( Hugs Incoming ))))))))))
(((((((((( Hugs Incoming ))))))))))
Re: Re. Love Actually Love
3rd Jul 2019 10:54pm
Are you calling me Panda now to get back @ the Davey teasing!? 😂
Love you buddy & damn, look at all those RL adds up there when months ago, you thought you were done. Pfft...😉
Love you buddy & damn, look at all those RL adds up there when months ago, you thought you were done. Pfft...😉
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Re. Love Actually Love
9th Jun 2019 9:38pm
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21st Jun 2019 2:53am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2019 00:11am
Never a truer word said. All you need is love, as The Beatles so famously said.
I’d hug you again, bestie. 😊
-J
I’d hug you again, bestie. 😊
-J
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Re: Re. Love Actually Love
21st Jun 2019 2:55am
Luvz dem hugs :-))))))))))))))))))))
thank you, Jessica, you are one in a million :-)))))))
(((((((((( BearHugs ))))))))))
Rick
thank you, Jessica, you are one in a million :-)))))))
(((((((((( BearHugs ))))))))))
Rick
Re. Love Actually Love
10th Jun 2019 6:17am
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21st Jun 2019 2:56am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2019 1:39pm
Top to bottom...yes! LOVE this one! :-)
Fierce hugs incoming!!!! :-)
Fierce hugs incoming!!!! :-)
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Re: Re. Love Actually Love
21st Jun 2019 2:57am
thank you sweetie :-)))))))
(((((((((( Pouncing Hugs just for fun )))))))))))))
Let's wrestle :-))))))))))))))
(((((((((( Pouncing Hugs just for fun )))))))))))))
Let's wrestle :-))))))))))))))
Re. Love Actually Love
10th Jun 2019 2:52pm
Yes, love is sustenance for the mind, body & soul... 🌹💙
Great work, David ! 😎
Great work, David ! 😎
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21st Jun 2019 2:58am
Re. Love Actually Love
Anonymous
10th Jun 2019 8:43pm
Beautifull. Biggest hugs ever and always.
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Re: Re. Love Actually Love
21st Jun 2019 2:59am
thank you my friend
even more hugs in return :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
(((((((((( 1,000,000 Hugs ))))))))))
even more hugs in return :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
(((((((((( 1,000,000 Hugs ))))))))))
Re. Love Actually Love
12th Jun 2019 10:56am
Such a beautiful spill of ink… I think I'm in love with these words.
"Love is not a dish for one
We all need somebody to love" I adored this!
Delanee.
"Love is not a dish for one
We all need somebody to love" I adored this!
Delanee.
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21st Jun 2019 3:00am
Re. Love Actually Love
13th Jun 2019 8:28am
When you live long enough know that love is a verb, I have realized the simplicity of it. This could not have been worded any better. Always respect.
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21st Jun 2019 3:02am
Love is a verb and a verb is a doing word - yes indeed :-)
thank you so much :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
thank you so much :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
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14th Jun 2019 11:19am
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21st Jun 2019 3:03am
I agree 100% with you Dawnraider :-)))))))))))))))))
thank you for the visit and the wise words :-)
thank you for the visit and the wise words :-)
Re. Love Actually Love
14th Jun 2019 3:56pm
In stanza 2 you bring home those haptic expressions of love. I really like the window metaphor in stanza 3 and the clown car metaphor further down. Quite winsome piece. It touches my heart how much love this loving piece inspired. I'm glad to pile in with the rest. <3
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21st Jun 2019 3:04am
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2019 5:19pm
David_MacLeod, A mix of some of my favorite styles...Laughlin, Lifshin, a touch of Post Modern...mixed with your own panache. Thoroughly enjoyable, well shaped, easily adaptable to most readers sensibilities! Thanks for sharing!
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4th Oct 2019 5:28pm
Re. Love Actually Love
Anonymous
4th Oct 2019 5:20pm
David_MacLeod, A mix of some of my favorite styles...Laughlin, Lifshin, a touch of Post Modern...mixed with your own panache. Thoroughly enjoyable, well shaped, easily adaptable to most readers sensibilities! Thanks for sharing! (comments moved from competition page).
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