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You Give
you give me purpose
as you lay it on the line
me just a peon
you my fighting lion
life is far from easy
every existance a chore
give me life my sweet
for in that I can give no more
you brighten my days
when the sun refuses to shine
give me your heart my sweet
and I shall give you mine
as you lay it on the line
me just a peon
you my fighting lion
life is far from easy
every existance a chore
give me life my sweet
for in that I can give no more
you brighten my days
when the sun refuses to shine
give me your heart my sweet
and I shall give you mine
Published 7th Jun 2019
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2019 7:51pm
Such a beautiful confession of love. Lucky the one you love. Beautiful ink
10th Jun 2019 3:03pm
29th Jun 2019 8:50pm
The shadows over a fallen lion feeds the Earth once more. But from non possible defeat strength is reborn in ourselves igniting the will of love within.
11th Jul 2019 2:56pm
Incredible write.
We underestimate how our romantic relationships affect our self esteem. A good relationship empoweres us. On the other hand, a bad relationship rips our self worth to pieces.
And call me old fashion, I love a poems such as this, that are presented with rhyme and meter.
We underestimate how our romantic relationships affect our self esteem. A good relationship empoweres us. On the other hand, a bad relationship rips our self worth to pieces.
And call me old fashion, I love a poems such as this, that are presented with rhyme and meter.
