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MAKES ME FORGET
She calls my name
I forget the rejection
she rushes to my embrace
I forget loneliness
we kiss long and hard
I forget I am undesirable
she tells me she needs me
I forget incompetence
we strip naked
I forget inhibition
we make sweet love
I forget myself
I forget the rejection
she rushes to my embrace
I forget loneliness
we kiss long and hard
I forget I am undesirable
she tells me she needs me
I forget incompetence
we strip naked
I forget inhibition
we make sweet love
I forget myself
Published 5th Jun 2019
Author's Note
This is one I wrote in 2013. Stumbled on it while looking for something else. Enjoy!
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5th Jun 2019 7:29am
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5th Jun 2019 6:47pm
Thank you, Pandora. Yes it is a beautiful place. A kind of dream world, right now.
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5th Jun 2019 10:38pm
Yes sir that is the key...one in use I am severely lacking This was an idealistic piece . I appreciate your read and comments, Sir Crow,.
Anonymous
6th Jun 2019 10:10pm
Being in the moment not in the mind, the self is best, you said it well, sharing with another is also the best. :)
7th Jun 2019 1:50am
