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Keeping The Tab....
He planted serotonin kisses and lollipop lashes as her body gyrated and wrenched in hypnotic euphoria.
He was like a greedy little boy on a mission for the best damn goodies in the candy store. Lick, nibble, cotton candy swirlin'
... .... tongue slip slidin' on slick pink confection.
His sweet tooth was flooded, and well fed; senses inebriated with tart rippling rose. She poured like an unsteady shot of hundred proof whiskey, but thanks to him, it was a double.
Climbing down his body, she licked herself from the corner of his mouth , mischievously whispering......
"This round's on you bartender.
Liquid Ecstasy - dirty & no rocks, please".
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Re. Keeping The Tab....
2nd Jun 2019 1:43am
Okay now Miss. Pandora, you go on and open your silken box and allow that love to beautifully spill, this is one for the silk sheets my sweetness
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2nd Jun 2019 7:36am
I'm gracious of your endearing comment. Thank you so very much, not my best...a little writers block has set in....
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Re: Re. Keeping The Tab....
2nd Jun 2019 7:42am
I love your comment & thank you since my muse is off my off game right now..damn her, and this isn't my best, for sure. It was posted on impulse but I kept it....
I actually cropped that pic too!😃
I actually cropped that pic too!😃
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2nd Jun 2019 2:42am
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2nd Jun 2019 7:44am
Yay...epic score then!!😁
Thanks for reading me & commenting. I need to come see you & hope to soon!!
Thanks for reading me & commenting. I need to come see you & hope to soon!!
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2nd Jun 2019 4:27am
I've been that greedy little boy... definitely not something to be kept in moderation. Love those kind of sugar highs. Yummy write!
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2nd Jun 2019 1:32pm
I bet you have been & Ive been that greedy girl! Thanks, it isn't my best..trying to free my writer's block. Ugh
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2nd Jun 2019 1:34pm
I thank you for such an encouraging response. I'm glad you think so.😁
Re. Keeping The Tab....
2nd Jun 2019 7:43am
Her fountain of delight left him well watered! Erotically cheeky ending!
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2nd Jun 2019 1:35pm
Heehee... I had to throw in a little humor;) Thanks bunches, Solomon!
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2019 2:35pm
Ya know, I'm gonna have to add you to my list of "approach with caution at work" poets. Criminy, girl! Hitting the icebox now...
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4th Jun 2019 2:12am
Am I ever grateful to see your comment, I was feeling crappy about it given some writers block. Thanks, girlie!!!
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2019 1:41pm
Had to come back & snatch this one for my collection ;-)
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2019 7:02pm
Girrrrl...... 😅
“She poured like an unsteady shot of hundred proof whiskey, but thanks to him, it was a double.
Climbing down his body, she licked herself from the corner of his mouth”
👀 “!,:&$;,&!!!!!
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Love Taryn 💕
“She poured like an unsteady shot of hundred proof whiskey, but thanks to him, it was a double.
Climbing down his body, she licked herself from the corner of his mouth”
👀 “!,:&$;,&!!!!!
~€{*~!!!
~,€>\!.,!,£¥]?}~€^!!!
Love Taryn 💕
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4th Jun 2019 2:19am
Oh, I love you!! I thought this was so God awful, so if you like it & add it, then I'm more pleased with it. I've had writer's block going on & even visited your old stuff last night for inspiration.. it's the only place I really know to go!!🤷♀️ I studied your schemes carefully & found metaphors I'd like to steal as well, but won't. I take something new away each time I read you!
Bunches of Pandy love!! ❤
Bunches of Pandy love!! ❤
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2019 4:40am
You are so incredibly kind, gorgeous...I sent you PM as well...and please feel free to to be inspired...let me know if there were certain ones which you recall standing out and I’ll get them to you to reflect on...
there is a poet I’d like you to visit - she’s not been here in a while sadly, but you and she think alike...you have very similar...I don’t know what to call it...I feel you would love her work...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems-by/darksighs/
Hugs and love to you
Xoxo Taryn 💕
there is a poet I’d like you to visit - she’s not been here in a while sadly, but you and she think alike...you have very similar...I don’t know what to call it...I feel you would love her work...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems-by/darksighs/
Hugs and love to you
Xoxo Taryn 💕
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8th Jun 2019 7:10am
Damn you, sweets. I sure hope you return.:/
I thank you for the referral & cant wait! Yes I'm answering a dead profile, lol, because I know you'll return. So I'm treating it as if you're still here.😄🖤💌
I thank you for the referral & cant wait! Yes I'm answering a dead profile, lol, because I know you'll return. So I'm treating it as if you're still here.😄🖤💌
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2019 3:38am
Now THAT reply cracked me up!!! 🤣🤣🤣 (dead profile)
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RIP TARYN
Hugs and kisses to you woman!
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⚰️ ⛪️ 💀
RIP TARYN
Hugs and kisses to you woman!
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7th Jun 2019 6:08am
Whoa. Your writing definitely lives up to your username❤️ Going for a cold shower now :P
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8th Jun 2019 5:28am
Thank you kindly, Miss Liv! I'm gracious of the praise, it's good to feel as if I'm pulling something off right.;)
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8th Jun 2019 5:36pm
LOL, thank you for visiting & throwing me such a cute comment. I appreciate it muchly, my lovely!!
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 1:27am
Pandora.. brilliantly done.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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12th Jun 2019 2:07am
Thank you for the honors, Dave. It's so good to see you around here again. I was worried about you. Hugs...
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9th Jul 2019 12:38pm
Pandora I am new here as you will see and I don't understand why you would say you didn't like this, I loved it lived it felt it breathed it, I was the Bartender.
truly amazing now I need a cold shower
truly amazing now I need a cold shower
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Re: Re. Keeping The Tab....
10th Jul 2019 11:44pm
Well, welcome to the Underground! It's great to see new faces & I look forward to reading you. On a sickly day, you made me smile..thank you for such a gracious compliment!!!
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10th Jul 2019 11:56pm
Pandora so many people have posted comments here, they see what I see just how talented you are, how you can hold people from first word through to the last, draw them in let their imagination take over and for me I feel it. Thank you
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Re. Keeping The Tab....
13th Nov 2019 4:43am
This both turned me on and had me giggling. Your puns made for much mirth on this night for me. I appreciate where you take me to with your poems. You make me share your desire and feel the pulse of your sensuality down where the sun don't shine. ;-)
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. Keeping The Tab....
17th Nov 2019 9:42pm
I'm absolutely delighted you found both humor & arousal in this. I told ya, buddy.... sex & humor can make a situation
.....or break it. 🤔 Haha! Thanks again, dearest John!
.....or break it. 🤔 Haha! Thanks again, dearest John!